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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-12-02 11:10 AM

It was only a touch.

No less a prayer than winds that brush
devout in their passing.

Listen to the earth sigh its holy
pleasure to the night.

It was only a touch.

And yet my world still trembles.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-02 11:12 AM

Ooooh myyyyy Eric!
So softly beautiful this is!
Love it..another keeper for my 'Eric File'.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Pezz1
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since 2002-10-27

Posts 33
Scotland

2 posted 2003-12-02 11:28 AM

Nice words, great emotion, i like it alot

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-12-02 11:50 AM

Eric~
That is the most beautiful of thoughts~
You touch me with your verse~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-12-02 11:57 AM

Beautifully expressed !!!
the touch , says so much
Hope

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-12-02 12:13 PM

It was only a touch.

And yet my world still trembles.

So beautiful, this is, Eric.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-12-02 12:15 PM

whoa! some touch!

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-12-02 12:15 PM

Beautiful writing Eric.

Jason

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2003-12-02 12:19 PM

Very nice reach within and you connected your inner feelings to the things affecting you in the world around you very well.

Eric

Martie

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California

9 posted 2003-12-02 12:43 PM

Ericc...understanding this you have expressed it so beautifully.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

10 posted 2003-12-02 12:54 PM

well done

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-12-02 02:37 PM

You have a way of catching universal feelings in these little poems, and giving a fresh view of them....

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-12-02 04:13 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and may true love forever touch your heart and melt it with fond softness! (big hugggssssssss) You are a true romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2003-12-02 06:50 PM

A thrill kindred to holy...

Well done Eric. TD

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-12-02 07:06 PM

enjoyed

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2003-12-02 08:06 PM

Ericc - sometimes all it takes is one gentle touch, amazing it is. Nice thoughts...

BC

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

16 posted 2003-12-03 01:18 AM

Once again, you touch our hearts and our souls with your gentleness and Light.

Sing to me your songs of love and I shall answer with my heart.

Thank you, dear one.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2003-12-03 05:01 PM

And yet my world still trembles.

The right touch does just that. *S* Beautiful write! *S*

cosmic-duality
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since 2003-11-24

Posts 14

18 posted 2003-12-03 05:06 PM

in such a small amount of words, you compress a wealth of emotion.very well put.

Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

19 posted 2003-12-03 06:00 PM

Eric,

Beautifully done.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

20 posted 2003-12-05 07:48 PM

Beautiful expression Ericc~
This rocks and rolls, like an aftershock
that quakes beneath the surface.

Enjoyed this, very much~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

21 posted 2003-12-31 03:14 PM

And it still is...
trembling, that is....

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

22 posted 2004-01-03 08:27 PM

Some have the right touch...James

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

23 posted 2004-01-03 08:30 PM

*sigh* such is the power of a touch...Magnificent...

mara marti
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since 2003-06-15

Posts 10
Chicago, Illinois

24 posted 2004-01-03 10:27 PM

hello eric I loved your poem. The emotions and words you used were so beautiful, it touched my heart.Keep writing , and since im a new member I hope to get to know you and everyone else here.Good job.Take care
Mara

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

25 posted 2004-01-04 05:04 AM

I feel the need to

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