Open Poetry #30 |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK ![]() |
I met my Angel on the internet, and wrote this before we had even met in person. I will never forget all the times we share The touching of hands The smile The kiss I did not know how a love could grow With each passing day This feeling I'd miss If you weren't there To give me a smile To banish a tear To hug And to care How have I lived until now? they'd ask If they knew how I felt How I tremble For you And my reply, I don't know! I don't think that I did, I was waiting, And waiting. That's true Each moment we have Is so precious to me I long for your words For your voice For your touch And your kiss, is the thing, yes! I yearn for at night When all has gone quiet Then I need it So much And more, yes I know When you feel it is right Then more we shall know Of each other And then Our love it will bloom Like flowers in spring But never to fade In the autumn Again Never forget, whatever else fails You'll always have me To lean on To care For the rest of your life I promise you now I never will leave I shall always be here Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels [This message has been edited by Loverlost (12-02-2003 10:18 AM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful write and from the heart! i hope you and your love have a wonderful life together! take care. amy ![]() "love is like a butterfly-- |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. I hope, too, that you and your love are together forever. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-02-2003 01:35 PM).] |
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Masked Intruder![]() ![]()
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Wonderful format, great thoughts! Why didn't you rhyme one of the stanzas? It just got left all alone there by itself. *grins* -*-*- |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
Many thanks for your comments. And yes, we ARE together :-) As for the "lost" stanza..well I guess it just kind of rhymed with itself! Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice. Such looving words. They must be a comfort to her to hear them. Very sweet. Very much enjoyed this. ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() Well I will go down with this ship |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how romantic! |
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