Open Poetry #30 |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I can't find Right And Wrong Much less find My own Breath. I think I remember Me shoving Him out the door Last night When the Poison Became too much And killed me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My sweet KoKo Puff! I hope that this was just a very bad dream! Today's another day ~ go out there and make it a good one! Your poems certainly can run a gamut of emotions! lol Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
KoKo - sometimes it becomes that way... wishing you well... BC |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Linda- lol, yeah...Guess they do I guess it could all just be a bad dream...Who knows? Somebody pinch me? BC- Thank ya |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
You seem to be doing OK for a dead poet..perhaps you should start your own Society? Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow!! Powerful and stirring. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, I hope everything is alright, dearest friend, I understand how poetry can run so many emotions and that none of this is how you feel right now! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Loverlost- LOL Thanks for the read and comment Eric- Thanks for the Wow!! It always feels great to get those (= PS- Noah- Thank ya. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
no words just |
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duckysgirl Junior Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 26Down South |
KoKo...i really enjoyed this. Sometimes the poison scares me too...and then there are times when i welcome it!!! Duckysgirl |
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