| Open Poetry #30 |
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Foolish Passion |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
Then, be on your way, smooth skinned lover boy Meet adoration, with many voices; They to whom, foolish passion, shakes fancy; Spirit hath not set; Intersect, and give a name too; Or they run into one; March on smiling; Leap rainbows, with blinded eye; Such plenty and perfection, never was found lustrous; In the City of overscored, adorning gratification and greed; I shall sink in the remains, having scope and breathing space; Ringing grooves of change Titch |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Richly done piece with a lot of heart. Good stuff as usual, my friend. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titch, Well done, enjoyed. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
March on smiling; Leap rainbows, with blinded eye; Wow...titch...such incredible imagery. Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
Thanks J For moments taken, in sharing and critique, i appreciate muchly Titch |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
hi there Seymour, so glad it brought a smile love Titch |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
hi jaicie what a joy to read and share love Titch |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whew! That was a close call, Titch! Sounds like you managed to escape that Lothario with your dignity still in tact! ~ and lived to tell the tale very well! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titch~ I totally enjoyed the richness of this penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write! Love your use of imagery in this piece. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed your poem. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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