Open Poetry #30 |
Promises |
jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Softly, now I come to breathe… your sweet scent of Infinity. The Light, the love, the brief exchange… of hearts as One eternally. Sensing now your inner soul… my life is yours forevermore. Hold me sweetly in your embrace... let me taste the kiss of immortality. Together we will swiftly fly… to the ends of time in eternity. This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66 |
This poem was very gentle and full of feelings. If I can love just once with that intensity....thanks for the write. ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it sounds like a dream |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, jaicie, these are some promises! You shine. Love, Margherita |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you everyone for replying. It makes my day to know that someone enjoyed my art. Guard...yeah, wouldn't we all like to love with that intensity! Still looking for it myself. James..back atcha', big guy! passing...that's exactly what it is -- a dream; but, a nice one...huh? Margherita...dear one...promises that hopefully will shortly come true for each of us. And...I sincerely try to keep the "shine" polished <--been a rough one lately, though...so, thank you for noticing! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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