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Yearning
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Yearning |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Graphic From Pandoras Box My sweet Love, as the day turns to night I feel the loneliness inside The yearning for you The gentleness of your hand as you tenderly touch my face tilting my chin so your lips touch mine I miss the softness of your eyes as brown looks into green I, seeing the love in yours as you gaze deeply into mine You, seeing my love reflected back to you from my inner being revealed Yearning for the feel of your arm lovingly around my shoulders as my head rests upon yours And the soothing touch of fingers rubbing my arm so tenderly with the touch of your love Missing the feel of your hand as we walk on a stroll side by side with fingers entwined as our bodies brush lightly against as we walk along enjoying the presence of each other Oh how I yearn for you..... just to see you and touch you and feel your touch Yes, how I yearn for you....... revisited........because......... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-01-2003 09:51 PM).] |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
thats the worst time of love...the yearning parts...good job i liked it We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Ethel...this absolutely aches! Know the feeling sweetie...well said. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A feeling well conveyed! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
wow... beautifully written, man... i had to fight back those tears... what a wonderfull poem... absolutely loved it! thanx for sharing it with us all. "So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is intense Ethel...such longing and loneliness |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
THia is wonderful. You brought tears to my eyes..and an aching in my own heart for one I miss, although she lives with me still. Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, I hope everything is alright, dearest friend, I understand how difficult it can be to be apart from one who loves you very much temporarily but I know soon you and Gary will be together forever, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good golly, Miss Molly! Now you have me yearning for Gary! Gary, where are you? lol Seriously speaking, Dear Ethel Mae, this is one of my favourites of your poems! It is sweet and sensual. Have you ever thought of writing a Harlequin Romance novel! You are well on your way with your "Yearning"!  Hugs for both you and your Honey Love,  & Linda |
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