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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean 
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Bright eyes blink behind withering skin Hands slightly tremble now and then Hair now graying where once was black Hunched over in a chair, a crooked back Waiting for something day after day Silently passing the moments away Listening for sounds of anyone near No one around to see one last tear.... |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
nice work...would love to see what you could do without the constraints of continuous rhymes....thanx for the read |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
touching |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice work, Deb....a true portrait of so many of the elderly and how their lives turn out...it's very sad. |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Great work!Some people don't understand that rhyming is not a constraint!Keep on rhymimg you have great timing! WildPoet  To earn respect, Give respect |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so lonely...but good |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DebLynne~ A gentle rhyme that is captivating~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Deb Lynne... This is incredibly sad...but, very well done. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Thanks All. I work part time at the hospital and find I leave my heart at the end of every shift. |
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