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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-11-28 11:48 PM

If I have
seemed
a bit curious,
it's my
need to find
my name in
the sea..

I lost my urge to speak
long ago,
when I took away
my own skin,
and was left with nothing
but cold...

Layers have been
given new weight
and muscles have weakened..
Only sighs
rise
in the foam..
the remanence
of
salt colliding with
sand..

I've denied
myself
the right
to a
burden
that is all my own..

I have chosen
not to read
the hint of
dusk..
I have
avoided
the existence
of the sky..
Withered in
decision,
it's too easy
to admit
to yourself how
simplistic

a name can be...

I'll miss
this warmth..
I'll
kiss
the sun
as it
leaves me..

and I
will never
part this way again..
I won't
take my ashes
with me..

..I once had a shadow,
that breathed fire..

I was mislead
by the haze
of ignorance..

Teased
by bliss..

Threw my name into a sea,
and chose
to
forget.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2003-11-29 12:38 PM

neat imagery here, it transports the reader

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

2 posted 2003-11-29 01:59 AM

excellent poem. I liked it

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2003-11-29 04:10 AM

as always your words are smoke from a fire i know...helen

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-29 04:49 AM

God!

*picking self up off floor*

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-11-29 10:51 AM

Wow...!!!!!

Eric

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2003-11-29 09:16 PM

your poetry comes from places most haven't thought about visiting yet.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-11-29 09:47 PM

deep images that take the reader....to places beyond!
pictureme :-)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-11-30 12:40 PM

Kaoru~

'I've denied
myself
the right
to a
burden
that is all my own..

I have chosen
not to read
the hint of
dusk..
I have
avoided
the existence
of the sky..
Withered in
decision,
it's too easy
to admit
to yourself how
simplistic

a name can be...

Oh my !!
You have such a full talent~
EXQUISITE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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