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Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

0 posted 2003-12-21 07:14 PM

I could not see my path, it was so dark.
Felt it only with the soles of my feet
when I drifted from side to side,
and wondered if there was hope for me...

My fearful steps stumbled me away
from the other world I had created,
which begged me not to leave.
Please get me to the other side,
I prayed, the other side of hide...

What I want is who I am, a part of the collect.
Awake my consciousness, make me whole...
Surrender!
I accept.

The Sun is reborn out of darkness now
The Light of Life and Love does shine.
I dance upon my brightened path
and know I’m not alone...
I know that I am home.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-21 07:17 PM

"The Sun is reborn out of darkness now
The Light of Life and Love does shine.
I dance upon my brightened path
and know I’m not alone...
I know that I am home."

This piece is pure magic!
I especially love the above lines.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2003-12-21 07:47 PM

Kahlil,

   Nicely penned.   Isn't this something that many can relate to?  Yep!  Thanks for  posting this.
         Happy Holidays!
                  Sadelite

Please get me to the other side,
I prayed, the other side of hide...

What I want is who I am, a part of the collect.
Awake my consciousness, make me whole...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-12-21 08:44 PM

Thank you so much, Nancy and Sadelite. Smiles, hugs and Happy Holidays to you, too!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-12-21 09:43 PM

I might not always comment on your pieces....but I want you to know how they leave me in awe. Chris

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-12-21 10:11 PM

That is quite an honor, thank you so much. Merry Christmas to you! ~K~

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-12-21 11:11 PM

"I dance upon my brightened path
and know I’m not alone..."

May the forces of the universe gently light your path.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-12-22 11:12 PM

I felt like you were writing my life story,
and yes, it's nice to know we're not alone.

Thank you for this meaningful poem,
and for leaving me with so many good thoughts.

Merry Christmas to you, Kahlil~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2003-12-22 11:41 PM

Thank you Icebox and Bluesy....I treasure your comments... ~K~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2003-12-26 03:05 AM

Kahlil --- surrender is the key! Beautifully written. I'm personally touched by this poem. May God Bless you!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

10 posted 2003-12-26 03:08 AM

Thank you, Iliana, that means a lot to me. Happy Holidays... ~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-12-26 04:16 AM

very uplifting

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

12 posted 2003-12-26 10:28 AM

Thanks Dixie. Happy New Year! ~K~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

13 posted 2003-12-26 11:36 AM

There is a wonderful depth to your words...simply beautiful!

Eric

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

14 posted 2003-12-26 11:41 AM

I am honored by your comments, thank you, Eric. ~K~

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