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Open Poetry #30

See the Truth

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

0 posted 2003-11-29 02:55 AM

Thinking back on that day
I told you how I felt
I remember that you told me
You loved me but not in that way
You told me taht you just wanted to be friends and nothing more
Your reaction took me by suprise and I pretended that I was ok
But deep inside my heart
I know that we were meant to be more than just friends
You will eventuall see the truth
And I'll be waiting for you
But until that day I'll just sit
And wait for you to see the truth

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-11-29 03:31 AM

So positive. Thumbsup for perseverance.

Love,
Terri~

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

2 posted 2003-11-29 12:28 PM

thanks

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2003-11-30 01:04 AM

Good job! It is a very hard thing to put in words! Keep writing!

Loverlost
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 89
UK

4 posted 2003-12-01 05:53 AM

Beautiful poem..I just hope your wait is worthwhile.
x

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

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