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froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2003-11-28 10:52 PM

Reaching out my hand
I claimed your own.

In your eyes I saw that smile...
The smile I had waited so long
to see.

Upon caressing your cheek
I began to whisper______

only to be awaken from my sleep.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-11-28 11:23 PM

awww dont ya hate being awoken from a dream??? lovely...whisper....

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2003-11-28 11:47 PM

you wrote
the pang of that
waking moment very
nicely....
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-11-29 12:00 PM

Sometimes dreams should
last, shoudn't they?
Hugs

Ethel

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-11-29 01:39 AM

psst...maybe it's a sign of things to come. You are so deserving!!!

Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-29 05:18 AM

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2003-11-29 06:17 AM

see, I told you it would get nice replies.....:-)

_________ice
><>

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-11-29 09:36 PM

Really enjoyed this froggy. Very nice ending.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-11-30 12:42 PM

Froggy~
Oh ... how lovely is this~
VERY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

9 posted 2003-11-30 12:47 PM

ahhhhh...doncha' just hate when that happens?

But, extremely well done, Froggy...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

10 posted 2003-11-30 12:57 PM

I agree with all of you. You did an excelent job at describing that feeling. i hate it when that happens!!! Good job.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

11 posted 2003-11-30 01:49 PM

Thank-you everyone for the wonderful and
sweet comments.
I wasn't sure if this would go over in here
but thanks to ice I tryed it.
Thank-you all again.

Have a smiling and happy day.

Hugs to each of you

:-)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2003-11-30 06:00 PM

A sweet and sensual whisper little one...
Enjoyed.
TD

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

13 posted 2003-12-01 12:08 PM

Thank-you ThisDiamond
for the nice comment

:-)

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