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Open Poetry #30

Snowblind (a winter's wonderland)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-01-24 12:07 PM

winter winds
drifting time
before they end ...

loss of sight,
beauty within

bitter colds
endless snow
of mountains mold ...

through the night,
growing old

the morning brings
in new light
as birds sing ...

a land of white,
a wonderous thing

One's outlook can be another's expression.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-01-24 12:46 PM

Craig, I could see the white snow even
without a picture. Very good writing, Poet sir.

Hugs

Ethel

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

2 posted 2004-01-24 01:30 PM

Craig.
I am impressed by your poetry, I think in this type of poem you are spot on in structure and form. Your words are concise and give out a meening which is all important I would keep this one on disc and submit it. well done.
richard.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-24 01:34 PM

thanks for sharing that place with me

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-24 01:50 PM

i see it too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-24 01:55 PM

Wonderful Craig...much enjoyed!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2004-01-24 01:58 PM

(smiles) Yay! This is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, you know how to speckle any landscape with magic, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-01-24 02:11 PM

Beautiful sight -- beautiful write!

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