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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-01-23 04:32 PM


In heartfelt beseeching…reaching…
My fingers break the surface
Of your gentle pool
And I swallow back amazement
In tiny awestruck sounds
As if we have known each other
Through a thousand ages
There from the depths emerges
Your touch upon my tears
And lifting up before me
A water-being spout of clean sight clears
Your essence rushes through me
Gathering the tiny drops
Until my cask is light and empty…
Floating in your wake and dreams
Refilled in your fresh water kisses
From the sweetness collected
Of rainwater wishes
Passion steams
Aware, I bobble softly
In the cosmic puddles
Of ponds your cupped protective palm
Translucent in the silver wet
We drink
A new loves wine

Copyright Kkh 1/23/04

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-23-2004 07:27 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-23 04:44 PM


Floating in your wake and dreams
Refilled in your fresh water kisses
"From the sweetness collected
Of rainwater wishes
Passion steams
Aware, I bobble softly
In the cosmic puddles
Of ponds your cupped protective palm
Translucent in the silver wet
We drink
A new loves wine"

*sigh*
feels so good to see all this romance flowing...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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2 posted 2004-01-23 05:38 PM


So good to see you again TD...

and I love the sips of romance
~smiling
M

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-01-23 06:47 PM


TD

That is superb

I'll print it out if you dont mind

regards

Dave

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4 posted 2004-01-24 10:38 AM


K,  you are quite good at this,  this write
of passion in words that blend beautifully
before the eyes of the reader.  

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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5 posted 2004-01-24 10:41 AM


Absolutely awesome, TD...thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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