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Ravenwolfvoyager
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0 posted 2004-01-23 09:16 AM


A Swan in moonlight spoons the waters touch
Washing the sand castles of your ill-fated love

My dry lips seeks the fountains of your kiss
That ascends my felicity to the summit of its bliss.

You are the industry of my hearts content
And the ministry of my loves consent

You are the star like diamond that cast it spell
And you are the beloved that I love so well

You are the never ending morrow after the moon  
And the reason why there is so much redness in a roses bloom

I hold you close before a swans moonlight poetic play
And waltz with your heart in loves celestial water way


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-01-23 09:32 AM


oh big SIGH  (I am allowed to sigh yes?)
gawd yer good and this is so tender.  Wonderful writing.
!

If the sun never rises
I want to go down in flames
I want the last thing I hear to be
you whispering my name.
Every moment together is time
that we borrow,
so hold me tight and love me like
there is no tomorrow.

{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-23-2004 12:01 PM).]

KristieSue
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2 posted 2004-01-23 09:33 AM


very touching....

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-01-23 09:35 AM


Ravenwolfvoyager
Well you should get the girls with this one.
LOL Well done.

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4 posted 2004-01-23 09:39 AM


enjoyed
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5 posted 2004-01-23 11:55 AM


My oh my, Jeff!! This is beautiful!!
All of it is awesome, but this verse just
really stood out........

You are the never ending morrow after the moon  
And the reason why there is so much redness in a roses bloom


Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-01-23 12:06 PM


Valentines Day should see this poem rise to the top, m'friend. What a powerful kiss to your special love.
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7 posted 2004-01-23 12:09 PM


She's right lovely.
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8 posted 2004-01-23 12:27 PM


this is dreamy!
Martie
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9 posted 2004-01-23 12:46 PM


Jeff...Your use of language to convey emotion is amazing...this is beautiful!
iliana
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10 posted 2004-01-23 01:33 PM


Jeff, this was really lovely, and your usage of imagery was fantastic!     jo
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11 posted 2004-01-23 01:43 PM



Isn't it a wonderful feeling
to be gathering up a basketful of sighs?

Suetang
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12 posted 2004-01-23 02:51 PM


Hello Jeff

Is there no end to your marvellous talent?  Your words swept me off my feet and took me to a magical place, as they always do.

"Love is a power too strong to be
overcome by anything but flight"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2004-01-23 04:37 PM


As I read you in different styles, I especially appreciate the warm images that come from a seer...a seeker...a man with depth and wisdom.
You write romance with tenderness, and respect...all the more auspicious.

Toasting you Poet.
TD

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14 posted 2004-01-23 04:42 PM


"My dry lips seeks the fountains of your kiss
That ascends my felicity to the summit of its bliss."


as said by others...this is "dreamy"
very romantic


nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2004-01-23 07:48 PM


a nice poem, Jeff...I like the different moods of you ( and I am always learning new words

M

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16 posted 2004-01-23 09:56 PM


Out of the sweetest of hearts bleeds the most sweetest poems, full of vivid pictures, full of passion and romance....

Strong but gentle....the right balance in a mans heart!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

jaicie114
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17 posted 2004-01-24 01:31 AM


RWV...

Dear Sir...I think it's all been said...but, whew...yep, this is good. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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18 posted 2004-01-24 05:19 AM


This should be bumped!


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