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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A Swan in moonlight spoons the waters touch Washing the sand castles of your ill-fated love My dry lips seeks the fountains of your kiss That ascends my felicity to the summit of its bliss. You are the industry of my hearts content And the ministry of my loves consent You are the star like diamond that cast it spell And you are the beloved that I love so well You are the never ending morrow after the moon And the reason why there is so much redness in a roses bloom I hold you close before a swans moonlight poetic play And waltz with your heart in loves celestial water way |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh big SIGH (I am allowed to sigh yes?) gawd yer good and this is so tender. Wonderful writing.! If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear to be you whispering my name. Every moment together is time that we borrow, so hold me tight and love me like there is no tomorrow. {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-23-2004 12:01 PM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
very touching.... "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager Well you should get the girls with this one. LOL Well done. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My oh my, Jeff!! This is beautiful!! All of it is awesome, but this verse just really stood out........ You are the never ending morrow after the moon And the reason why there is so much redness in a roses bloom Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Valentines Day should see this poem rise to the top, m'friend. What a powerful kiss to your special love. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
She's right  lovely. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is dreamy! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff...Your use of language to convey emotion is amazing...this is beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jeff, this was really lovely, and your usage of imagery was fantastic! jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't it a wonderful feeling to be gathering up a basketful of sighs? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff Is there no end to your marvellous talent? Your words swept me off my feet and took me to a magical place, as they always do. "Love is a power too strong to be overcome by anything but flight" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As I read you in different styles, I especially appreciate the warm images that come from a seer...a seeker...a man with depth and wisdom. You write romance with tenderness, and respect...all the more auspicious. Toasting you Poet. TD |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"My dry lips seeks the fountains of your kiss That ascends my felicity to the summit of its bliss." as said by others...this is "dreamy" very romantic |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a nice poem, Jeff...I like the different moods of you ( and I am always learning new words M |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Out of the sweetest of hearts bleeds the most sweetest poems, full of vivid pictures, full of passion and romance.... Strong but gentle....the right balance in a mans heart! ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
RWV... Dear Sir...I think it's all been said...but, whew...yep, this is good. Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This should be bumped! |
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