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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-01-23 07:13 AM

Symbols Marks

I hold a page of symbols marks
The reading of, set lovely sparks
That lights a candles wick of light
To center stage a show of bright

It radiates a glow of show
As pretty as the flakes of snow
As fragile as the dew of dawn
As agile as the light of morn

A little breeze to dance the leaves
A tender touch of voice to tease
A dove to set a velvet glove
To coo the essence of my love

And I on tender hooks of hear
Rub the tender of my ear
Hold my breath in silent awe
Await the splash of wave on Shaw

A millipede of crawling rhyme
To reach the essence of your time

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-01-23 07:21 AM

You know these moments,
when you leave me feeling just
full...
and poking the library button!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-01-23 07:27 AM

~soooo romantic~
*sigh*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2004-01-23 08:47 AM

It radiates a glow of show
As pretty as the flakes of snow
As fragile as the dew of dawn
As agile as the light of morn

============================

I do so love your imagery wrapped in rhymes divine...
oh to walk barefoot on the shores of your poetic mind

Got your note...yes--when it rains it pours--oh I know...I will write soon and catch you up..

*ww*

How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees
not to be brought to his knees by the beauty of the sky and sea

Cherokee Lore

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-23 08:49 AM

Very very nicely said dear Sy!
Lovely note to end the week on.
Hope you have a great day and a wonderful weekend.
~Smiles, hugs, & tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-01-23 08:53 AM

Who needs vitamins, when they can start the day with your wonderful words? You are such a precious gift to everyone here. No matter
how the day begins, after reading your poetry, there's a sense of peace and beauty.
~Sadelite~

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

6 posted 2004-01-23 09:55 AM

Wonderful, simply inspiring!!!!!!

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

7 posted 2004-01-23 12:15 PM

Seymour,

There are too many lines I like. I'd only be rewriting the poem but, these lines make me feel so good, thank you.

"A little breeze to dance the leaves
A tender touch of voice to tease
A dove to set a velvet glove
To coo the essence of my love"

I would like very much to one day hear you recite some of your poems. I wonder if Ron ever thought of adding voice to this site. I wonder if it is possible??

SG

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-01-23 12:21 PM

don't know how you do it...sigh

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2004-01-23 12:25 PM

It radiates a glow of show
As pretty as the flakes of snow
As fragile as the dew of dawn
As agile as the light of morn

This is so pretty, Seymour.

I'm keeping it, too!
(LOL, my Seymour library is getting quite full....
but I'll just make "Seymour # 2"!!)
Hugs, my friend

Ethel

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-01-23 01:42 PM

Seymour~

'And I on tender hooks of hear
Rub the tender of my ear
Hold my breath in silent awe
Await the splash of wave on Shaw

A millipede of crawling rhyme
To reach the essence of your time'

... 'on tender hooks of hear' indeed~
AND you are the read aloud poet of the day -
EVERY DAY !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2004-01-23 02:12 PM

Sunshine
Now you gave me a sun blush. Hugs

muted
Thank you, thank you.

JM,
I'll be waiting at the catch up gate.
WWRS

Sadelite
You are a love.

Ravenwolfvoyager
Flatterer.

Simply,
Not sure, will have to find out, thank you.

Nancy,
Thank you dear.

passing,
Cause I loves you all.

Ethel
You are precious. Hugs.

Marge,
Love you too sweety.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-01-24 12:30 PM

"A little breeze to dance the leaves
A tender touch of voice to tease
A dove to set a velvet glove
To coo the essence of my love"

Awwwwwwwww --- speechless, I am.......

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2004-01-24 07:07 AM

iliana
You are sweet.

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