Open Poetry #30 |
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Symbols Marks |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Symbols Marks I hold a page of symbols marks The reading of, set lovely sparks That lights a candles wick of light To center stage a show of bright It radiates a glow of show As pretty as the flakes of snow As fragile as the dew of dawn As agile as the light of morn A little breeze to dance the leaves A tender touch of voice to tease A dove to set a velvet glove To coo the essence of my love And I on tender hooks of hear Rub the tender of my ear Hold my breath in silent awe Await the splash of wave on Shaw A millipede of crawling rhyme To reach the essence of your time |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know these moments, when you leave me feeling just full... and poking the library button! ![]() |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
~soooo romantic~ *sigh* ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It radiates a glow of show As pretty as the flakes of snow As fragile as the dew of dawn As agile as the light of morn ============================ I do so love your imagery wrapped in rhymes divine... oh to walk barefoot on the shores of your poetic mind ![]() Got your note...yes--when it rains it pours--oh I know...I will write soon and catch you up.. ![]() *ww* ![]() ![]() ![]() How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely said dear Sy! Lovely note to end the week on. Hope you have a great day and a wonderful weekend. ~Smiles, hugs, & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Who needs vitamins, when they can start the day with your wonderful words? You are such a precious gift to everyone here. No matter how the day begins, after reading your poetry, there's a sense of peace and beauty. ~Sadelite~ |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wonderful, simply inspiring!!!!!! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seymour, There are too many lines I like. I'd only be rewriting the poem but, these lines make me feel so good, thank you. "A little breeze to dance the leaves A tender touch of voice to tease A dove to set a velvet glove To coo the essence of my love" I would like very much to one day hear you recite some of your poems. I wonder if Ron ever thought of adding voice to this site. I wonder if it is possible?? SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't know how you do it...sigh |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It radiates a glow of show As pretty as the flakes of snow As fragile as the dew of dawn As agile as the light of morn This is so pretty, Seymour. ![]() I'm keeping it, too! (LOL, my Seymour library is getting quite full.... but I'll just make "Seymour # 2"!!) Hugs, my friend ![]() Ethel |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'And I on tender hooks of hear Rub the tender of my ear Hold my breath in silent awe Await the splash of wave on Shaw A millipede of crawling rhyme To reach the essence of your time' ... 'on tender hooks of hear' indeed~ AND you are the read aloud poet of the day - EVERY DAY !!! *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Now you gave me a sun blush. Hugs muted Thank you, thank you. JM, I'll be waiting at the catch up gate. WWRS ![]() ![]() ![]() Sadelite You are a love. Ravenwolfvoyager Flatterer. Simply, Not sure, will have to find out, thank you. Nancy, Thank you dear. passing, Cause I loves you all. Ethel You are precious. Hugs. Marge, Love you too sweety. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"A little breeze to dance the leaves A tender touch of voice to tease A dove to set a velvet glove To coo the essence of my love" Awwwwwwwww --- speechless, I am....... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana You are sweet. ![]() |
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