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jord4n Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15 |
Youth youth used me as an excuse or so she said youth used me as an excuse and stole everything from me youth used me and then gave me an excuse youth, innocence, is what she claimed well, I know better than that you used youth for your excuse and if that's what youth is then I wanna hurry and grow up cause youth has lost it's innocence in myself and i feel much older than what my bones bare I lost trust in youth I lost trust in you and most importantly I think I lost trust in life -- thx say anything you want. - Jordan www.send3.net |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i do understand angst, but "jaded" is usually reserved for those who are older (keeping in mind i assume you are of younger years)....expressing your feelings this way gives you a chance to come back later and reflect....hopefully from a different "point of view"....dont worry, youth may have stolen away with your trust, but, youth truly exists in our minds and our hearts....you can live it at any age in your life... im glad you are here sharing your thoughts...  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the permutations in this one, the progressive changes on 'youth'. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jord4n Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15 |
Thanks for your comments. - Jordan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens..yeah |
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