Loves' Unquenchable Fire (For Valentines Day)

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Open Poetry #30

Loves' Unquenchable Fire (For Valentines Day)

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-22 10:49 PM

Thunder,rain,
Wet,tender,moist,
dripping,drops,
upon my skin,

Breathe,warm,
blowing,soft,whispers,
breathing,rhythmically,
upon my chest,

Fragrance,perfume,
smell,sweet,enticeing,
flowing,aromatically,
across my neck,

Cherry,mouth,
Moist,soft,succulant,
Tasting,kissing sweetly,
Upon my lips,

Words,whispers,
sounds,delightment,
Spoken,gently, softly,
Into my ear,

Bodies,motion,
One,together,entwined,
Moving,touching,caressing,
Skin upon skin,

Heart,love,
desire,emotion,trust,
Beating, pounding,
Upon each chest,

Wishes,Dreams,
Contentment,completement,
Passion,growing,
Love's unquenchable fire!

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2004-01-22 11:18 PM

Cool!!!
This was nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-01-23 04:33 AM

almost like you are touching upon all five senses here....really liked the short broken descriptions, gives a bit of an urgency...

*i think this is my favorite of yours so far*

very nice

Obscurity
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream

3 posted 2004-01-23 04:58 AM

Very very touching ARH

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

4 posted 2004-01-23 10:21 AM

A beautiful write my friend. You are truly talanted and a poetic marvel.

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

5 posted 2004-01-23 10:27 AM

You have a great way of putting all those simple words together. A pure reading enjoyments.

Laoha's Pen

Chinapoet

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-01-24 04:20 PM

You used many of my favorite words...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2004-01-24 04:30 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you have all the senses of true love and may this fire always burn dearly in the candle of your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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