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Could Be (tell me what you think)
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Could Be (tell me what you think) |
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rainydaymusic Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 26 |
I don't know. I wrote this weeks ago, fixed it a few times, still can't tell if I like it. COULD BE Well it sounds true. mine. You are, as I refer to you. you are, mine. We both know, well, you know, and maybe, as I do, on my worser days, on these badder days - bad grammar days, I say things, I mean not to. But it sounds true! You could be, mine. Well, could be, if you tried. "blue lights shining over my life" |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is really cute, like a shy little plea...  has me smilin' |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoyed this!!! It's cool!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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