Open Poetry #30 |
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Penned On Parchment |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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![]() Penned On Parchment In the quiet solitude of the evening she sits alone in this room she loves surrounded by its familiar warmth. With her quill poised in gloved hand the lit candle provides glowing light illuminating in flickers from the mantle. Aromatic scents of lilac on the breeze wafts gently through the open window as her mind drifts along in endless query. The sounds of a lonesome train whistle blowing in the distance reminds her that it is now midnight and time to slumber. The passing train clickity clacks down the tracks as the night again grows silent in its solitude. She thwarts the idea of sleep. With her mind now full of images she rises to sit at her writing desk. Ever so delicately she dips the quill in the never ending bottle of ink touching it to the aged parchment. Slightly the parchment does crackle as her thoughts flow from spirit to page as once again the poet within emerges. Penned in eternity on the aged parchment written with the eloquence of her soul she writes this, the journey of her life. Softly the breeze blows through yon window drying the ink, capturing this moment of life. Slumber now returns as she drifts off to dream. (revised repost 10-27-02) {thanks to Sunshine for such a beautiful picture to post with my meager offering!} It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-22-2004 10:23 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This was like visiting an old friend. Liked it then, and its aging well.... |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah yes, lovely Donna. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful written. You created beautiful images. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tucking it into my library... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully written Donna ,I could picture you with quill and ink , its usually in the quite of night that I begin to write Hope |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
very well writern poem I enjoyed it a great deal richard. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...you set the mood in parchment and I can see the beautiful hand of the writer. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I need a room like this |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna~ This was a wonderful story! ![]() "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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