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A Tension Day
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A Tension Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Tension Day Sometimes, when the heart races, and thoughts wind around nothing can console the feelings that stand me on end. It's a burden developed over time, difficult to bear. Running faster than I can catch up to. Hidden cries, a dawn deceived, my own noose tightening. Choking from the lack of humane the dark becomes darker, (s)wallowing becomes harder and the fool in me rises to the dying feelings of my life, a mockery. Too worn to share the load, too selfish to be there for another, too much in need, enslaved by these thoughts that grow the worry and fill the space with cluttered existence. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
some days.. are like that... nicely written M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Too worn to share the load, too selfish to be there for another, too much in need, enslaved by these thoughts that grow the worry and fill the space with cluttered existence. Exactly how I feel... you put it perfectly "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know Ron, and there's nothing I can do about it but sit it out and hope my brain decides to downgrade the worry to a calmer level... I even dreamed (thought it was real) something that happened( didn't happen) last evening and had to walk through the house to check and make sure if it was my imagination or not. Kristie Sue ...I wish this on no one. hugs M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
dreams can often leave us unsettled.. they are too real or seem to real to have been just a dream..and to vague to have been real. when they play on our fears..it makes it even harder at times to shake them... hope the day gets better for you dear... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Choking from the lack of humane the dark becomes darker, (s)wallowing becomes harder and the fool in me rises Fear/anxiety/depression can do this to us. We must rise up against the unknown to see how small the demons really are. Be well my friend. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Choking from the lack of humane the dark becomes darker, (s)wallowing becomes harder and the fool in me rises to the dying feelings of my life, a mockery. Too worn to share the load, too selfish to be there for another, too much in need, enslaved by these thoughts that grow the worry and fill the space with cluttered existence." im sending you a *hug*....but after reading this i think i need a hug too! so here is one big enough for the both of us... **HHHHHHUUUUUUUUGGGGGGG** |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hate to say it again because it sounds like I'm repeating myself, but I know what you mean...me too |
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