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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-01-22 07:30 AM


It’s all within the flow

It’s all within the flow my dear
The cycle and the sew
That’s covered by the snow my dear
And blankets all we know

It lies in sleep beneath the deep
A sleep of fantasy
Within the guile of winters wile
Waiting ecstasy

And when it’s time to change the floor
It should not seem so strange
The flowers of the inner core
That fills the open range

It is the argosy of life
Dancing to a pipers cry
It is the calling of the fife
The echo and the sigh

And so it stirs each year anew
Under a sky of blue



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-22 07:35 AM



Dear Sy...
sometimes,
it's all within the know!


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2 posted 2004-01-22 08:03 AM


and you got the coolest flow we know.

Morning sweet Sy-guy.

Hows my fave poet dude and dragon this morn?

*ww*

How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees
not to be brought to his knees by the beauty of the sky and sea

Cherokee Lore

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-01-22 08:06 AM


This one flows beautifully, dear Seymour.
I love it and will read it again in my library.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-01-22 08:17 AM


Sunshine
Each know is a flow and
each flow is a know.
But they all need your sunshine

JM,
Thank you Tink for the early check. I'm feeling better today and think I'm on the
mend. I'll try and get out an Email to you today. Hope all is under control at home
and you're making progress, what ever that means. WWRS

Margherita
You are a sweetheart, thank you dear.

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5 posted 2004-01-22 08:54 AM


Love the flow of this one Sy!
Another beautiful morning verse from your gifted pen.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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6 posted 2004-01-22 08:57 AM


great write... :-)

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

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7 posted 2004-01-22 09:01 AM


Enjoyed this Sy.. indeed it is in the flow..and in the know that goes with it..


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8 posted 2004-01-22 09:16 AM


Very well written...i enjoyed reading...
thank you for the words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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9 posted 2004-01-22 09:25 AM


indeed it is in the flow and the know...
lovely Sey...good morning.

scorpio
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10 posted 2004-01-22 09:55 AM


Well done Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2004-01-22 10:07 AM


nice read
jaicie114
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12 posted 2004-01-22 10:53 AM


Oh, Sy...

You are simply astounding...thank you for this beautiful verse.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Martie
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13 posted 2004-01-22 10:59 AM


Sy... Your usual wonderful!!  
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-01-22 11:32 AM


Nancy,
Shall we flow some tea?

Thank you Kristie.

Cpat,
You got that right.

Goldenrose,
Words for a rose.

Gentle,
And a gentle good morning to you.

scorpio
Thank you dear.

vandana,
Thank you dear.

jaicie114,
And love and light to you too.

Martie,
For that you get a




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15 posted 2004-01-22 12:46 PM


you always make me feel good, and smarter than I was before I read you
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2004-01-22 12:57 PM


passing,
And that makes me happy.

Duncan
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17 posted 2004-01-22 01:00 PM


Good afternoon Sy!!!  Another blue sky day it is...
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18 posted 2004-01-22 02:01 PM


another good write seymour, very strong rhyme patten [not forced in any stanza] darn fine poem.
richard.

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19 posted 2004-01-22 02:39 PM


It is the argosy of life
Dancing to a pipers cry
It is the calling of the fife
The echo and the sigh

And so it stirs each year anew
Under a sky of blue


And, your flow is always perfect, my friend.  
Hugs  
ethel


Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-01-22 03:32 PM


Duncan,
And a blue sky day to you too.

richard,
A darn fine comment, thank you.

ethel,
Thank you love.

ice
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21 posted 2004-01-22 08:34 PM


Seymour
Catchin' up on my readin', glad I found this one, beautiful arrangement of words...
Well done good poet...:-)
_______ice
   ><>

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2004-01-22 08:36 PM


ice
I thank you my friend.

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