Open Poetry #30 |
About Roses |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
About Roses The roses in my path of view Grew from out a tender brew Were subject to a fertile vein Of rain and peace and no cocaine Each person weighs a different scale Each person sails a different sail And what we seek is common but Each kernel is a separate nut The common is we live and die And pardon is no part of lie But from our life grows empathy That breaks on shore as sympathy But sympathy is subject to The roses in your path of view And thought the colors vary wide They all are drawn by ebb of tide. There is a compass partly true Do to others what you’d they do. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Enjoyed reading, this mix of insight and feeling ~C |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
May roses line your walkways as paths lead to all tomorrows... Good morning Sy. So good to see you on this fine Wednesday. |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
You are a good writer Seymour, I enjoyed this and your other work. regards Richard. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Words of wisdom Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write I find here this morn Sy! Kettle is on...tea ready soon. Want to send Randy to pick it up? ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you for starting my day with such a lovely! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with us.....it is always a pleasure to read you especially about roses....enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya SY and good morning...cannot tell you what an inspiration for me this was, and spoke to me loud and clear...thank you for writing and sharing. Whether, you know it or not, thanks my friend,for the advice. Needed this one desprately....Love Lee J. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
choshi Good reply, thank you. Lady, Good morning and may the sun keep you warm. Thank you richard. scorpio, Thank you sweet. Nancy, Thank you dear and be right there for tea. Gentle, Thank you for making my day with your reply. Charisma, Thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I thank you for your rose garden. I often rest there when I am tired. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes Seymour, "do unto others..." Awesome write this morning. Warm banana bread with tea? Hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Would be my pleasure. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Morning Sy Just had to read cause I spyed my favorite flower that came into view. Thanks for sharing your lovely words of poetry. Bon-Bon |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"But sympathy is subject to The roses in your path of view And thought the colors vary wide They all are drawn by ebb of tide. There is a compass partly true Do to others what you’d they do." ..a lesson usually learned the hard way! an easy flowing read much enjoyed... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Good morning and thank you sweet. muted Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Each person weighs a different scale Each person sails a different sail And what we seek is common but Each kernel is a separate nut Kind sir this is another extraordinary write. Full of thought and wisdom and a pleasure to read. Thank you. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
But from our life grows empathy That breaks on shore as sympathy lovely imagery...profound write. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
You are so wise, and this writing is more like a golden virtue to pass on. Lovely creation, Seymour. McLean |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do to others what you’d they do. ============== it would be my pleasure..... *winkiewinkie me sweet Stinky* How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees not to be brought to his knees by the beauty of the sky and sea Cherokee Lore |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager The pleasure is mine. steavenr Thank you much. McLean My delight to have you read. Jm No, the pleasure is all mine, miss you Tink Bye the way your pictures were great. You are becoming quite the professional. Some were sensational. WWRS |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love your romanitc tales but, I love the wise ones too!!!! Well Done Sy!!!! Alwayz enjoy reading YOU!!!! HUGS, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing, Thank you sweet, Bridgette, You are a love, thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, I see today, you are pouring out wisdom through roses! Enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana And a rose for you. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Sy... A beautiful write (as always) from a beautiful soul...thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy ... I have not been here in awhile and have missed your poetry so much. This is a delight and may you always have fragrant roses along your path. Hugs to you, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jaicie114 A sweet reply, thank you. Marti, Glad you're back, Thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, I love this. I wasn't here yesteday, but I'm sure glad that I saw it today. I'm keeping this one, my friend. Hugs and a rose to you Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you and that makes me happy. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You're welcome, my friend. I couldn't get the rose to do right earlier, so here's you another one..... Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you sweet. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my friend... if only everyone would read and heed. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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