Open Poetry #30 |
Heaven Only Takes The Good Ones |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I have just heard today that my Uncle is in hospital with cancer of the brain and it is also in other parts of his body.They are not sure whether they can operate. I wrote this poem through a sea of tears so it probably isn't any good.I immediately thought of my father when I got the news and he helped to guide my pen as I wrote this. * * * Heaven only takes the good ones And that's why you are there But I miss your loving presence Some days can be so hard to bear I often walk along the shore And search high above the blue I take great comfort in my words For they keep me close to you My life has moved along So much richer I've become I feel you whisper through the trees And feel your warmth in the sun Not a single day goes by When I don't feel you near A part of me is missing To me you were so very dear I know I should move forward That's what you'd want me to do But for now I'll sit in silence As I stop and think of you * * * "We sat together for what seemed like hours without saying a single word. Our hearts were so finely tuned to one another that we felt no need to speak" I am in motion |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
you poured it out beautifully...it's like a symphony...and yes, heaven does take the good ones |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
It is good, and heartfelt,,,,hugs to you,,,,and, yes, it also made me think of my father as well,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A very touching write. Thank you for sharing it. I guess if heaven only takes the good ones, I better arrange to be buried with lots of marshmallows to toast. *grin* |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
omg...this is absolutely beautiful...I am sorry for your bad news and will keep your uncle in my prayers... "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
May i express my very best wishes to you and to all of your family at this very difficuly time....may love fill your heart forever... Really enjoyed the heartfelt and loving poem Sue...written in the most difficult of circunstances ...makes it even more well written....thank you for sharing..... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
God bless you and yours richard. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*hugging gently* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh God! How touching! makes me think of mom |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue It is not easy to say goodbye. I'm so glad that your father's spirit is still close enough to give you some comfort. Hugs! |
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