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Worth More Than That
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Worth More Than That |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Did you hear the sound of my heart breaking in the silence when the clock ticked past the twelve of time last night and you were still not there beside me? In my heart I knew that a decision had to be made, a hand had been dealt and a card had been played. ~No, I did not cry out in anger~ but instead bathed in subtle realizations that as much as to yourself you had to be true, so must I become like you. I'm not saying that your right I'm not saying that your wrong I'm saying that you need to figure out where you want to belong. There is no anger there is no pain, just a wish for peace for both of us to gain. Please don't doubt my love you know where my heart is at, but I'm not doing this any more because I am worth more.... than that. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, you are! You are worth way more than that! You managed to put your strong message across in your customarily gentle manner! ~ Reminds me of the proverbial iron fist in the velvet glove scenario.  I hope all turns out for your highest and best, Dear Donna! You deserve it! Warm hugs, Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"but instead bathed in subtle realizations" You and me both, Donna hugss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So sad..yet in this I read strength Donna.. Stength to move on... Well said... Love ya dear lady! Hugs~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Life is what it is.... and we grow. Thank you all. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Worth more YES! You have a real inner strength thats begging to be set free....you're on your way! Lovely this lovely you!  much  Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Well done, a gentle write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"But I'm not doing this any more" God, how many times have I said that *shaking head* You go girl!  You sound so strong, just when I need it, because I'm in one of my weak moments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A great big humungous 10-4 on that!!! Excellent....ya done good with this one... |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
oh acceptance, how blessed is its arrival and your verse illumines wisdom love Titch |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, know that you deserve so much more than that because you're worth it! (kiss on cheek) I send many angel friendship hugs your way, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Checking in from places beyond, m'dear...and knowing that you are now embraced in many hugs and knowing hearts... Sun |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this Aunt Donna, it's just too bad that you had to expirience this, to be able to write about it. Well done. Tell me, how does it feel, to treat me like you do?~Orgy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Amen Donna!!! There is no right or wrong!! We are human beings after all! Wonderful poem sweet lady~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna, dear girl, How did I ever miss this when first it was posted? Wonderful write! hugs to you, Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Love, Terri~ Well I will go down with this ship |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
~No, I did not cry out in anger~ but instead bathed in subtle realizations that as much as to yourself you had to be true, so must I become like you. ~*~ How well the title becomes the poem. How glad I am that you thought to send this to me, for my knowing that you will never stop growing. Always...K |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
darn, I almost forgot to get back in and thank everyone! Your all great. Hugs. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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