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please live for me |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Dreams are repercussions Of fights to do and die... Endings of discussions When I try to make up lies. Because belief makes Things come true, And I can’t deal Missing you. Doctors lie On some days too, And God has played A trick or two On me before... I’d love to hear him Lie once more. He was a man of sorrows |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Understood!!!! Full of deep feeling!!! Keep on writing!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
so meaningful. i especially liked this part-- "And God has played A trick or two On me before... I’d love to hear him Lie once more." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Just because He played a trick on you doesn't mean He lied, as He has a plan and serendipity helps us see it all closer and more dear! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mm hmm I'm with ya ~K~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I really should have written a bit of a disclaimer to this before I posted it. Though a poem really only has value where and how the reader finds value in it, don't want to mix anyone up on what I think. I know God doesn't lie, I'm just having trouble understanding how some of his promises work. Recently I've been told that my best friend, brother, and teacher is dying... quickly. And I'm sort of just waiting for that dream from Him to happen now. I'm wishing that God and the doctor were lying about it all... He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Bridgette, Thank you much  and, I think I will!J, I always love knowing what parts people like the most, thanks! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Noah, he's just real good with irony!  Thanks for your reply, always sweet.kahlil, thank you glad you replied.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alyssa, I'm right with ya! God just doesn't make sense sometimes. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
True,,,you can never give up,,,,,Mother Nature has a way of out doing doctors and gods Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
My heart breaks for you...your brother is in my prayers... "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, hardly ever! He has a twisted sense of humor and irony, and I guess seeing the whole picture makes it easier for Him.. and more confusing for us... Thanks for your reply Michelle, God is my creator and Savior. Thanks for reading, and thanks for your reply... Kirstie, thanks so much... he certainly does need them =-/ Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GG, I cannot believe you are not older as you show such maturity in your writing.  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
iliana, wow, didn't expect a reply for the things back here! Thanks so much for your reply. And thank you for the compliment, too...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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