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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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She Writes she takes all her emotions nerve endings exposed in lacking places them softly on paper black inked tear stains on blank pages leaving proof showing a pain she breaths only in her heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I breathe the words she leaves knowing I'm forever changed...  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I really enjoy your words Dave The image that I saw Echoing a mystery of paper cover with disjointed nerve ends old ink washed fresh with tears no one every wrote with a pen She spun magic Woven in words Her heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ You've written of one of my FAVORITE poets ... YOU~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And there are few write with this intensity, and feeling. Your writing is truly admired. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Helen, this is sad but heartfelt, sweet friend, may you and her keep writing on and let it all out and tear nothing but crystal tears that reflect the sunshine, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
An excellent write dear poetess!!!! Hope all is well with you!!!! Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....she writes in beauty, like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies; and all that's best of dark and bright.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"she breaths only in her heart" I love that phrase...great ending to a wonderful poem |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
passionate! i could just feel you in your poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
she is beautiful |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Her existence brings me joy and makes my heart soar like a hawk. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady The sound of emotion, well done. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...beautiful...I really feel this... ~K~ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
definitely makes me take a deep breath to hold back the tears... what we write is definitely WHO we are and WHAT we are made of... "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ditto what Karen said. YOU are an outstanding writer! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this much  |
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2writeis2be Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 45Live in London, but from TX |
yes I agree with some of the others. You're one of my favorite writers on this forum. Your stuff flows and reads very easily--only good writers can take old ideas and make them colorful and new so it's good you indulge us with your talents  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
leaving me with *sniffles* ...*cuddles* for you ...you are awesome |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
beautiful.. |
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