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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A crying plea from tears on a string A passing of keys solo in harmony An interplay of one thought and one journey Different levels of tribulation within one heart Different ventures undertaking one destiny Sing to me thy vacant voice Give me thy wonderment to fulfill My struggles are tied with yours My harp messengers my unyielding breath The peace of the air is born into life Thy wonderment forever will live Thy voice take me to death. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we are all bonded in one way or another music and poetry can always bring us together I love this write, though I do not listen to Mozart or play the piano anymore |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
RWV: You seem to play my thoughts... A Maestro in his own write relationships are like this... From subtle chords of one harmony, to multiple creshendo lifting the hearing soul to ecstacy. I am enjoying your poetry very much. TD |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
yes there are those invisible bonds, good write ...and season's greeting  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the song now I'm humming again |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
well orchestrated,,,,,flows well from ear to heart Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Mozart is one of my favorite composers of classical music and his songs do reflect love...passionate love ...every time I listen I am inspired to write romantic love poetry. My favorite Mozart sonata? My favorite Beethoven is "Fur Elise".... You pluck the stings of my heart with words of poetry that sing to me like a song of love... How did You know That I sing? ~ARH  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-27-2003 07:57 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really beautiful poetry! Happy New Year! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
My fave that brings tears to my eyes everytime I would hear my cousin play was "Swan Lake" Music that would heal a soul. A song that brings us both back to summers together as kids, too. [This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-28-2003 01:57 AM).] |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
what an inspiring interpretation of mozart, music becomes our own when we give it words joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ravenwolf It is so easy to see how much music inspires your life and your writing. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Very nice, RWV...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Music is a universal language...and touches many. Loved the meaning in this lovely poem! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And Pat was oh so right about you! I'm glad you're here, mon. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I sincerely hope you make a home here. You're worthy already and will be among this group's best. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Classical Played often The gentle weaving of the trees The sound of the huntsmen The toll of the bells Music Dave |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Jeff, here's one I missed back here on the back. Have I told you lately that I love your writing? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Lovely. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I find Mozart to be a genius of a composer and I believe his music brings life to every orchestration, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words are like a symphony to the ears... lovely. Mozart is not one of my favorites, I lean more towards Yanni...but Mozart is timeless, as are your words. HUGS |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I see you have a following, that does not surprise me...what does surprise me is that you continue to write masterpieces that flow effortlessly. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
These words produce music in the hearts of a reader... beautiful work! |
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