Open Poetry #30 |
Slaughter Farm |
Ben Junior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 21 |
Smouldering yellow folders And 226 dissolute ghost soldiers Folding at the foiled edge Devouring a hollow pledge Presented by uniformed men Only to be snared in a scorching pen Forsaken to the desert of solitude depth Where eyes be blind and ears be deaf Shells and concrete carcasses Silence the screams that echo to fallen masses Releasing the crimson falls As they seep freely through pellet holes Dressed in torn and sweat drenched mesh Inhaling the stench of rotting flesh While bathing in the humid vomit tarn They be the wasted pork of slaughter farm Devils march over the soil Kabul He who raped his brothers and sisters of life And he blowing the blind vengeance of brutality In the misty mountains of crimson stained serenity The reprisal of the sheep sin Urine and fiscal downpour over inert skin Weeks of confined brutalism Lead to the desperation of cannibalism Parched for the liquid of blood Gnawing through skin to a quenching flood The cage scream and shout As last breathes fade out Bathing in the humid crimson tarn They be the wasted pork of slaughter farm Devils march over the soil Kabul He who raped his brother and sisters of life And he blowing the blind vengeance of brutality In the misty mountains of crimson stained serenity |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very strong images here ..i'll be reading it again to digest it further... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I agree very strong images and honest!!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
vivid! i could feel your passion when you wrote this. i'd be glad to read more from you. Welcome! |
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