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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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I sure can't write like the masters but if I could I would love my son no more than I did last night as I watched him bathe his two girls, and get them ready for bed. I was truly blessed with my son, and this one is for him.  I look inside for the answers wondering if this love I live Could ever be matched to any poetic words? There, flashes of memories light the way as I try blazing a trail To find the muse that sometimes lives within my mind. It is her who gives my heart and soul its wings. What gentle words could ever possibly describe this feeling? The love, pride, or completeness held so close to my heart? How could I write showing the gratitude of being included Seems so small to you but it gives my life a purpose? I ache so for the words to describe the very essence of you, How I feel about you now, and how much love there was even then. How can I even begin to write and make up for time lost? There are no words. I sit back in awe at the wonder of you and all you’ve become. The laughing voices of your children break up my thoughts Just in time to stop a slowly escaping tear. Was it of love, laughter, or just being in a place of gratitude? Are those stars I saw reflected in your eyes last night? Hand in hand, you held each of them so delicately, Warming them with a smile, laughter, a loving poke here or there. I see their love, feel it, and know that it will always be this way. How did you become this man so wise, caring and complete? Daily you walk so imbedded in my memory. One day will you too sit as I do now in simple wonder? That such a simple event can bring such love and joy to a heart Is beyond my wildest imagination. Will you too watch one of your own children someday, While a simple bath being given to their child makes you Feel so lost for the words, but wanting to scream out loud, Or whisper in their ear so very softly, That beyond a shadow of a doubt, you love them, More than any words could ever say! For my son, my friend, my daughter-in-love's husband, and the father to the sweetest cherries on this Gramma's sundae. ~* I Love You *~  Life is but a magical mystery ~ Blessed Be ~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...I know this feeling when you see your child being a father and giving so much love...it is like the completion of a circle and it feels like there couldn't possibly be words to express it...but you have, and very well! Thank you for sharing this.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What gentle words could ever possibly describe this feeling? The love, pride, or completeness held so close to my heart? How could I write showing the gratitude of being included Seems so small to you but it gives my life a purpose? I ache so for the words to describe the very essence of you, How I feel about you now, and how much love there was even then. How can I even begin to write and make up for time lost? There are no words. I sit back in awe at the wonder of you and all you’ve become. The laughing voices of your children break up my thoughts Just in time to stop a slowly escaping tear. Was it of love, laughter, or just being in a place of gratitude? ========================= oh trust me dear...you found the words... the love radiates from this!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You just described how I feel every time I see one of children.  wonderful write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sharon, the love you have for your son radiates from this piece... How tender and beautiful this is. And yes..I know the feeling well. ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Full. There's just no other word to describe what this wonderful poem did to me. It left me very full. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles as wiping tears from face) Awwwwwwwww, is that your son who has healed so quickly after his recent accident? He looks just like an angel, just like you! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, that is so sweet of him to take care of his little girls just as I'm sure he always spreads his love to the world, God Bless You and your son forever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes, there ARE words...i just read them...poetry from a heart...h |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for sharing this beautiful moment, I could see the sparkle in your son's eyes and the love and care for his children, and I read a mothers love in every line. Beautiful penned straith from a loving heart. Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"How did you become this man so wise, caring and complete? Daily you walk so imbedded in my memory. One day will you too sit as I do now in simple wonder? That such a simple event can bring such love and joy to a heart Is beyond my wildest imagination" this touches so completely.....*sniffle* of course, I love this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Sharon! Straight from the heart! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is absolutely perfect! Misty eyed, I finished it and smiled...knowing that you've touched a cord in many of us. You have to be proud of you too, Sharon! He is a product of your love! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Sharon .... this is beautiful. You are very blessed lady!! Of course, you know that already. Hugs to you, Chris "At one glance |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*hand over heart* misty eyed... lovely lady that you are... thank you for sharing your joy with us. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The simplest of moments often bring the most joy!!!! This is such a wonderfully heartfelt poem!!!! LOVED IT!!!! I do love your writing Sharon!!!! They are little treasures each and every one!!! I hope to someday know what that's like to watch your child and their children in a priceless moment like that!!!! HUGS, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are all very kind and I can see also very understanding. Martie is right it is like your life comes full circle somehow. Watching them I knew if I left this earth tomorrow I had indeed made a difference, I did in fact make him I think our children are the best legacy we have, and they speak volumes of who we were, or perhaps who we would have liked to have been. Again, thank you so kindly for sharing that moment with me, it truly was a special one. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a beautiful hug all wrapped up into one....lovely you are! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge -- This was so very loving -- I know the feelings you have. This almost brought a tear to my eye, too. ..jo |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
“How could I write showing the gratitude of being included Seems so small to you but it gives my life a purpose?” “How can I even begin to write and make up for time lost?” “Was it of love, laughter, or just being in a place of gratitude?” “One day will you too sit as I do now in simple wonder? That such a simple event can bring such love and joy to a heart Is beyond my wildest imagination.” Sharon my friend, you are simply beautiful inside and out … and this is a testament to that. I often wonder what I have missed in life by not being blessed with children … and this is the essence of it. Truly beautiful. Thank you for bringing me this feeling through your words. Todd is such a lucky young man to be a part of you. I hope he knows that as we do through your thoughts. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
heartfelt and s touching Sharon , treasures bringing so many pleasures , your wonderful words said it perfectly Hope |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am glad you enjoyed this inter-action between just some mother and son, imagine how often this is common day to so many? Precious our children, no matter what the age, precious. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Such beautiful joy.. thanks for sharing Sharon Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This is Precious, and I am teary eyed writing this. Your words (yes you found them after all) beem that love with every sylable. All I can say is ...How radiant!!! Sherry |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, what a beautful poem this is. Words can't describe the way the love shown in this poem touched my heart. Thank you for sharing this with us. Hugs Ethel |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful thoughts put into words Sharon! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a touching tribute! *sigh* |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sharon, this is one of the best poems of love I have ever read. The love just oozes out of my monitor and surrounds me. Your son is so fortunate to have you for a mom and you are so blessed to have him for a son. May you always enjoy each other's caring gifts. Love to you and your family, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautiful write! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am actually overwhelmed with the acceptance of this poem. Never was very "mushy" until my daughter-in-law came into the picture, so this is her doing honest! She is more than a mother could ever want for her son, and more. So very happy you enjoyed this and I still believe it is hard to put love into words, and it is better shown, but what do I know? Thank you all so much. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Are those stars I saw reflected in your eyes last night? Hand in hand, you held each of them so delicately, Warming them with a smile, laughter, a loving poke here or there. I see their love, feel it, and know that it will always be this way." I'd say ya do "mushy" quite nicely Sharon.  Reminds me of my little sister and her baby this past Christmas. Thanks...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sharon you have captured the fullness of a precious moment and your song of gratitude is very very beautiful. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Sharon, that was a touching write. You have a strong adornment for your son and family and captured it so well in poetic essence. And I do have to disagree with you on something with your opening line. You do write like one of the masters and it is a pleasure to be in your company and admire your work. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Duncan ~ Yup that is the tingle I meant Margherita ~ Thank you and hope all is well your way. Ravenwolfvoyager ~ Well I keep good company I guess you all know I darn near lost my son last year, and we wondered if he would ever be the same. Actually, he is not, but we love this new version even more than I can say, so thank you all so much. Now, go hug someone you love for no reason. |
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