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Oubliette Of Oblivion - retoasted by special request
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Oubliette Of Oblivion - retoasted by special request |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Oubliette Of Oblivion ~*Marge Tindal*~ sometimes the hurt runs deeper than the words upon the page the rage the rage rumbles rumbles cascades falling forever backwards into an oubliette of oblivion sometimes just sometimes I forget to remember to forget ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
just sometimes I forget to remember to forget yeppie...sure do know that feeling Marge! Hugs |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 you are the best... I love the memories of this one.. such special times those forums were for me.. thank you sweet lady..so much ~*~Dawn "...and longed to kiss her hand an lie a thousand summers at her feet." ~excerpt A.L. Tennyson |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Boy....OOPS Girl do I know that well!!! LOL!!!!  Nice to see you!!!! Decided to play in the blue pages for a little while today!!!! HUGS, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Marge....do I know this feeling!! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
then there those times to remember... hugs Marge and a nice picture of you, catching your sparkle  M |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Wow...now I remember how I missed reading you, must remember not to forget that.  Charisma |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
It's great to see you finally Marge!!!! This was a wonderful write but I can't help wondering if this has anything to do with the birthday that I just had??? :-) Thank you Marge for sharing another one of your wonderful works!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
excellent write...oh how well I relate to forgetting to remember to forget...thanks for the poignancy of your work. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...A poem that many can relate to, including me.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My stars ! Thanks everyone for letting me know how you each can 'relate' to this one~ Dawn~ I can't tell you how much it meant for me to hear from you and know that you had printed this one out from allllllll the way back in Open #11 !! You are pretty gosh-darned special yourself gal ... and don't you EVER forget it~ Jeff~ ... at you~*Huglets* Thanks to you all on the photo comments also~ LOL ... remembering the evening (eons ago) I posted my FIRST photo ... and the wittle thing got taken down ... seems my BABY picture didn't seem to represent the REAL me ... but, but ... it was sooooooooo cute, Honest Injun~  Well, here ... see for yourselves~  AND ... DAWN ... you think YOU were the 'PoutPrincess' ??? LOL ... check it out~ Later, poets and friends~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh marge...look at that little angry faced child! oh i know you threw some tantrums... all that pink had to make ya angry! LOL forever gorgeous |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
But ... but ... somewhere in that little 'pout' was a poetess with a *twinkle*~ Ya' think ? You're priceless~  *Huglets* (of the 'cute' variety) ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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2writeis2be Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 45Live in London, but from TX |
Ooh yes, now I do like this one indeed!! And I'm picky so be flattered. hahaha. Nice one |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i saw you used the word "retoasting" instead of reposting...and well...i thought of toast (being that it is morning here and breakfast soon to be cooked) so no harm meant...just being playful.. (im delirious from no sleep) ~Omelette of no onion~ sometimes the crack runs deeper in the egg that fell upon the floor the rage at this stage my stomach rumbles complains feeding favorite breakfasts into it and omelette of no onion sometimes just sometimes I forget to remember the cheese! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes, enjoyed this one a lot |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, I know these feelings, so well. It's not easy to forget, even if you remember to. When the pain runs so deep, it takes a long long time to get rid of it. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I really liked this Marge but just loved the pouty princess. Love, Betty |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So nice to read this one again, Marge. Very well expressed! Hey great pictures too! I don't think you were pouting about all the pink, I just think your widdle chubby cheeks were just pushing down the corners of your mouth! (Nicole had those same cheeks when she was a baby) Soooooooo cute! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey Marge, " just sometimes" confusion can be clearer than... Nice pen for the direction of the write! wayne If nothing is something |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"the rage the rage rumbles rumbles cascades" Whoa! I got the picture. Great write, Marge. ..jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HEY ALL~ I am literally rolling on the floor at my little buddy, Dawn/Muted/TheORIGINALPoutPrincess !!! You have succeeded in giving me the biggest smile of the week !!! To all of you kind repliers ... me wubs ya' all~ Denise ...~ Thankee gal friend~ *Huglets* ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
yes, it happens! your words are like beautiful cascades, i could just bathe in them. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: What you say in this poem is so true! I loved the pictures too! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I do love your poem marge, and your new picture, and that adorable one of you as a youngin... but I just can't stop rotfl from muted there  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Let's see...."relate" is all used up....hmmmm.... ...maybe I'll just say this poem was me three days ago, or something like it...and my rump still hurts! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the repost...glad I didn't miss this one! love the new picture! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've turned those circles... but only you could write them so beautfully. *S* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
As long as you Remember not to forget to remember ME I loved it then and I love it even more now. Sad, but beautifully written words Marge. Come here and let me hug you  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gosh dang it ... you all are the GREATEST~ Big, big *HUGLETS* for each and every one of you~ And I mean it too !!!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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