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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-01-21 02:35 PM



Oubliette Of Oblivion
~*Marge Tindal*~

sometimes
the hurt runs deeper
than the words
upon the page

the rage
the rage

rumbles
rumbles


cascades

falling
forever
backwards
into an
oubliette of oblivion

sometimes

just sometimes

I forget
to remember
to forget

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-01-21 02:38 PM


just sometimes

I forget
to remember
to forget
yeppie...sure do know that feeling Marge!
Hugs

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2 posted 2004-01-21 02:39 PM




you are the best...
I love the memories of this one..
such special times those forums were for me..
thank you sweet lady..so much

~*~Dawn

"...and longed to kiss her hand an lie a thousand summers at her feet." ~excerpt A.L. Tennyson

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3 posted 2004-01-21 02:42 PM


Boy....OOPS Girl do I know that well!!!
LOL!!!!
Nice to see you!!!!
Decided to play in the blue pages for a little while today!!!!
HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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4 posted 2004-01-21 02:42 PM


Oh my Marge....do I know this feeling!!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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5 posted 2004-01-21 02:45 PM


then there those times to remember...

hugs Marge


and a nice picture of you, catching
your sparkle

M


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6 posted 2004-01-21 02:48 PM


Wow...now I remember how I missed reading you, must remember not to forget that.


Charisma

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7 posted 2004-01-21 02:50 PM


It's great to see you finally Marge!!!! This was a wonderful write but I can't help wondering if this has anything to do with the birthday that I just had??? :-) Thank you Marge for sharing another one of your wonderful works!!
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8 posted 2004-01-21 02:55 PM


excellent write...oh how well I relate to forgetting to remember to forget...thanks for the poignancy of your work.
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9 posted 2004-01-21 03:13 PM


Marge/sis...A poem that many can relate to, including me.  
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10 posted 2004-01-21 04:02 PM


My stars !
Thanks everyone for letting me know how you each can 'relate' to this one~

Dawn~
I can't tell you how much it meant for me to hear from you and know that you had printed this one out from allllllll the way back in Open #11 !!

You are pretty gosh-darned special yourself gal ... and don't you EVER forget it~

Jeff~
... at you~
*Huglets*

Thanks to you all on the photo comments also~
LOL ... remembering the evening (eons ago) I posted my FIRST photo ... and the wittle thing got taken down ... seems my BABY picture didn't seem to represent the REAL me ... but, but ... it was sooooooooo cute, Honest Injun~

Well, here ... see for yourselves~


AND ... DAWN ... you think YOU were the 'PoutPrincess' ???  LOL ... check it out~

Later, poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2004-01-21 04:28 PM


oh marge...look at that little angry faced child! oh i know you threw some tantrums...
all that pink had to make ya angry!
LOL

forever gorgeous

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12 posted 2004-01-21 04:40 PM


But ... but ... somewhere in that little 'pout' was a poetess with a *twinkle*~
Ya' think ?

You're priceless~
*Huglets* (of the 'cute' variety)
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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13 posted 2004-01-21 04:50 PM


Ooh yes, now I do like this one indeed!! And I'm picky so be flattered. hahaha. Nice one
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14 posted 2004-01-21 05:35 PM


i saw you used the word "retoasting" instead of reposting...and well...i thought of toast (being that it is morning here and breakfast soon to be cooked)
so no harm meant...just being playful..
(im delirious from no sleep)



~Omelette of no onion~

sometimes
the crack runs deeper
in the egg
that fell upon the floor

the rage
at this stage

my stomach
rumbles

complains

feeding
favorite
breakfasts
into it
and omelette of no onion

sometimes

just sometimes

I forget
to remember
the cheese!

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15 posted 2004-01-21 05:47 PM


yes, enjoyed this one a lot
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16 posted 2004-01-21 05:50 PM


Marge, I know these feelings, so well. It's not easy to forget, even if you remember to. When the pain runs so deep, it takes a long long time to get rid of it.
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17 posted 2004-01-21 05:52 PM


I really liked this Marge but just loved the pouty princess.
Love,
Betty

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18 posted 2004-01-21 06:23 PM


So nice to read this one again, Marge. Very well expressed!

Hey great pictures too!

I don't think you were pouting about all the pink, I just think your widdle chubby cheeks were just pushing down the corners of your mouth! (Nicole had those same cheeks when she was a baby) Soooooooo cute!

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19 posted 2004-01-21 08:25 PM


Hey Marge, " just sometimes" confusion can be clearer than... Nice pen for the direction of the write!

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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20 posted 2004-01-21 09:27 PM


"the rage
the rage

rumbles
rumbles

cascades"

Whoa!  I got the picture.  Great write, Marge.      ..jo

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21 posted 2004-01-21 09:29 PM


HEY ALL~
I am literally rolling on the floor at my little buddy, Dawn/Muted/TheORIGINALPoutPrincess !!!
You have succeeded in giving me the biggest smile of the week !!!

To all of you kind repliers ... me wubs ya' all~

Denise ...~
Thankee gal friend~
*Huglets* ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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22 posted 2004-01-21 10:10 PM


yes, it happens! your words are like beautiful cascades, i could just bathe in them.
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23 posted 2004-01-21 10:24 PM


Dear Marge:  What you say in this poem is so true!  I loved the pictures too!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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24 posted 2004-01-21 10:44 PM


I do love your poem marge, and your new picture, and that adorable one of you as a youngin...
but I just can't stop rotfl from muted there


Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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25 posted 2004-01-21 11:14 PM


Let's see...."relate" is all used up....hmmmm....

...maybe I'll just say this poem was me three days ago, or something like it...and my rump still hurts!

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26 posted 2004-01-22 03:35 AM


thanks for the repost...glad I didn't miss this one!

love the new picture!

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27 posted 2004-01-22 06:15 PM


I've turned those circles... but only you could write them so beautfully. *S*
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28 posted 2004-01-22 08:03 PM



As long as you

Remember
not to forget
to remember
ME

I loved it then and I love it even more now.
Sad, but beautifully written words Marge.
Come here and let me hug you

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Marge Tindal
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29 posted 2004-01-26 10:53 AM


Gosh dang it ... you all are the GREATEST~

Big, big *HUGLETS* for each and every one of you~
And I mean it too !!!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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