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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-01-19 03:45 PM




There is a Fairy of the Dawn
that dances merriment across the lawn
Inviting those in-believe to prance foot-play
as the sun majestically weaves the day
of believers in the Fae~

Arise on the dawn, as summoned this day
share in the dance of beauteous display
Join the magical Fae in the weave
accorded the wearers of slippered believe~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-01-19 03:48 PM


oh, this one has me looking for a flower to put in my hair so that i too can go dance with the fairies on the lawn!
enchanting *smile* of course!

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2 posted 2004-01-19 04:13 PM


I believe Marge!! Love this write and love your pic as well. hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

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3 posted 2004-01-19 04:14 PM


awwwww as usual you penned a beautiful gem here lady...and as always I enjoyed your fairy thoughts

(((hugs)))
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4 posted 2004-01-19 04:34 PM


Marge~this was lovely, magical..I love fairy poems~ Your new Picture is great!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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5 posted 2004-01-19 04:45 PM


The true magic is seeing my friend's face... *S*

This is lovely... just what my afternoon needed! *S*

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6 posted 2004-01-19 05:20 PM


Wonderful Marge!
You know I Believe!
Love seeing your pic up here as well!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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7 posted 2004-01-19 06:34 PM


Marge, I can't help but love this one.  My son and I had an experience in the Austin, Texas, area when we were at a retreat of sorts.  One morning we got up at the very crack of dawn, looked out at the large meadow out the back of our cabin -- and what we saw were zillions of tiny cob webbs, each group of webs identical and independent from the other.  It was one of the most miraculous sights my eyes have seen, truly unbelievable.  Your poem questions -- was it spiders or fairies who wove those webs! ......jo  
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8 posted 2004-01-19 06:38 PM


oh this poem so so very
precious and pretty!

it reminds me of my childhood with Tolkein and his mysteries...

"By the time you finish reading this...
You will have finished readding this"

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2004-01-19 06:43 PM


Friends~
You ALL delight me so~
Thank you for enjoying the Fae of my believe~

Suthern~
Thankee, sweetie ...~
I was asked soooooo sweetly to do the picture thang ... I simply couldn't resist~

Jo~
I have NO DOUBT that you know the answer to the 'who' of the webs~

*Huglets* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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10 posted 2004-01-19 06:52 PM


Dear Marge:  I looked for your fairy of the dawn, but all I found was frost fairies instead! Of course I believe in them too!

Love
Betty Lou

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11 posted 2004-01-19 07:13 PM


Marge,
    This is divine.  I've been there in the morning, barefoot, with my toes exploring to the webs of dew, too delicate to destroy, but still something to investigate with every sense.  Your poem wets that appetite again.  Thanks for sharing this.
                ~Sadie~

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12 posted 2004-01-19 07:32 PM


Oh Marge, I just adore the picture and I went out looking for the fairies. It's too cold here, they're snuggled under the flower pots piled high with leaves out behind the shed.

But they'll be out again real soon. Only sixty one days till Spring! Hooray!!!!!

Hugs, Marti

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more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


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13 posted 2004-01-19 07:56 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful. Both, the poem and the picture. I like your picture, too.
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14 posted 2004-01-19 07:59 PM


Marge/sis...I have seen them many times in the bushes at the bottom of the garden.  Love seeing your smile again!  
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15 posted 2004-01-20 06:46 AM


Marge
I have also seen them in gardens (like Martie) that I have made for other people and myself...They take other forms sometimes, when I stare into beautiful flowers I feel them enchanting my spirit, I view them in any sheer beauty that moves me...I see them in the eyes of your picture.
enjoyed....:-)
_________ice
   ><>

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16 posted 2004-01-26 11:08 AM


Friends and definitely believers~
To share ... is to share ... I could ask for nothing more~

So appreciative am I for each comment~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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