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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mist She floats within my heart in bliss Through the parting of a kiss In courtship of her snips and quips Warm upon my tender lips She lights my sky with puffs of bright With clouds that run in scoff delight Blues and hues of emerald green With chariots of gold between She fans me with desires breath If she don’t stop twill be my death My heart does run in rapped beat And then again in wrapped repeat I cannot stand the strain much more I’ve pulled too long this ship of oar And though I quell this pleasures dwell I’m sure my heart will burst in swell So fan me slow my butterfly I do not wish right now to die. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh dear Seymour, you are a whirlwind of passion. Sit and breathe and the let the heart relax. But I would say this is POSITIVE stress! So lovely! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling man, now this is really beautiful writing, it floats within as soft as a summer breeze, truly wonderful writing, and I always enjoy a Seymour breath of breeze I’ve not been around here for far too long, you know why that is, when I do visit, and these days its more often than not the archives, I like to restore my soul by reading the best of the best and that always includes you. Exquisite writing darling man absolutely one of your best. Utterly, utterly, perfect as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh my, Seymour... You certainly can string a word or two together...fan me, indeed! Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jaicie114 You make me smile, thank you. Marsha Nice to see you posting again. You write so well. Margherita Thank you dear, I think the stress was relieved with the write. Thank you dear |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written, Sy. Your words dance to a romantic tune. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You are a flower. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks its "Randy stress" LOL and ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis!!!!!  I was kissed in the mist ... those lips are on the top of my list.  *winkiewinkie* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Perhaps the name of Don Q. or Sly Sy... or some other charmingly romantic name for a dastardly scoundrel to have and swoop them off their feet......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Well a wind mill is a wind mill. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Randy said it must be the turkey. WWRS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy..this morning's write is one huge SIGH! Whew! Not sit still, drink some tea and let yourself cool down a wee bit. Hope you had a great day yesterday. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Had a great day yesterday, be right over for tea. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good after-Thanksgiving-Day, morning! How's your tummy faring? ~ I do know that your poetic mind is in fine working order!!!  You write of love and beauty with the grace of Venus and the passion of Apollo! ~ and fill your readers with Jupiterian joy! Warm hugs on a wet, cold Ontarian morning! EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, ooooh, what a beautiful, sensual write this morning. Just what I needed as it is a rainy, grey day here in Ontario Canada. This write has warmed my senses. Time for a second cup of Enchatress's tea and maybe a little bite of butter tart!  hugs, Chris"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You have the grace of an Angel Therefore the place of an Angel. Chris, My pleasure sweetheart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
she is a lucky lady |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Seymour Tabin, Very passionate feelings expressed here. I like it and I enjoyed it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, And you are a sweetheart. Kelly, Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She floats within my heart in bliss Through the parting of a kiss In courtship of her snips and quips Warm upon my tender lips She lights my sky with puffs of bright With clouds that run in scoff delight Blues and hues of emerald green With chariots of gold between Beautiful writing, Seymour...just beautiful!! And this sounds like you got quite a workout!! LOL She fans me with desires breath If she don’t stop twill be my death My heart does run in rapped beat And then again in wrapped repeat I cannot stand the strain much more I’ve pulled too long this ship of oar And though I quell this pleasures dwell I’m sure my heart will burst in swell So fan me slow my butterfly I do not wish right now to die. Whew!! LOL Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are a sweetheart, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Playing catch up with my heart... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I'm so glad I'm part of it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Seymour Catching up on some missed poems, saw this and it reminded me of Shelly, perhaps a little Byron thrown in for flavor.. enjoyed reading it... _______ice ><> |
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