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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Radar pours into my every being magnetizing I’m eating hazardous warnings all over again Sunlight filled windows flowering plants Paths viewing what I myself have witnessed Passing thought several narrow doorways, at times Making my escape, becoming a little hard of hearing Floating between passions and sleep…. When all of a sudden, a deranged musician presses His face against my window, flattening “my” cheeks His stare, grazing my right ear like a bullet on target His voice was educated and even Not very loud…and… It’s a darn good thing I wore my adolescence Along with my water proofed watch I felt very vulnerable and tired, and he knew As he silently whispered “You’ve had a traumatic day” Absorbing all sounds He put his arms around me and dried my tears I don’t exactly know how…but taking my hand in His, like he loved me with all his heart…for a very long time.. His eyes met mine, and I spoke with my mind’s voice “You’ve been way over protective, haven’t you” He smiled, and answered….”Well, my dear, we Do not tell God what to do, do we”? I smiled and whispered back….I’ve been waiting for you For what seems to be a very long time…. But, somehow, someway….you’ve always been right here with me When I’ve felt the deepest and darkest rejection and despair I knew you even then, when you didn’t have a name…that’s When you dressed me in fatigues, sitting me on a warm chair By the fire…with your arms always embracing… He met my eyes with no response, just glanced at his watch smiling “Its time to go”…..we sang with the radio all the way home and for one moment, one instance in time…I felt like together we were two doves…. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like two doves, you were, if but for the moment |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderfully done |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Very celestial, I couldn't quite decide if your angel came to take you home or if he just came for comforting. Couldn't quite do it, but that's the best part. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
When reading this, the word hope comes to mind, an angel that delivers hope, perhaps revealing its self to you in a dream, and at the end that dream comes true? I guess I have a strange imagination, anyway I love your poetry, mystery with little rays of light that almost reveal what's hidden... Which makes the reader question what they have just seen... __________ice ><> |
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