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Falling Stars
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Falling Stars |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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The horizon's blue I drink the hue The sunset takes it's bow. When stars shine for you Their glittered view Hangs heavy on my brow. If they fall askew A wish anew And silence needs somehow. Beating hearts are true And echo through The darkness gone for now.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a lot of territory covered in just a few words... nice read.. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
When stars shine for you Their glittered view Hangs heavy on my brow. I love the way you use words... You are so absolute |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice read...much enjoyed. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Seymour Tabin: thank you for visiting my little box, so happy you stopped by! Cpat: and you are always welcome here, thank you for taking the time Terrina:You are gonna start me *giggling* again! thank you for having just the right thing to say! Enchantress: thank you, im glad you enjoyed |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Just beautiful, such textures, images, feelings....~C |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a great rhyme scheme! and the theme is awesome! very uplifting! |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
I drink the hue One line so very powerful I feel. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is light and refreshing..... The blue of passions this reminds me of!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is REALLY good....I can't write like this....only silly stuff...well done sweets |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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