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Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 486
disbelief

0 posted 2004-01-20 10:20 PM


Don t look now.  

But I killed myself just moments ago.

It was but emotional, mental, ideological,
and only slightly physical suicide.

A pen through the heart.

          A stare through the soul.

A crumbling of faith.

          A lack of options.

All things end.
- I am not me anymore.

               - end of transmition -

© Copyright 2004 wes wiggins - All Rights Reserved
wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
1 posted 2004-01-20 11:09 PM


I also noticed there weren't any replies...what a pity, this is a good teaser
and there should be more in your face stuff like this I think


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2004-01-20 11:09 PM


Very interesting poem but I liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

forne_marin
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since 2004-04-13
Posts 140
Spartanburg, South Carolina
3 posted 2004-05-14 10:16 AM


You know, your use of the Willy Wonka font in this piece made me scratch my head.

I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

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