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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-01-20 09:50 PM


19

in   a
bottle
shed
skin

another
year i
have
lived

        but still

the candles
burn.

© Copyright 2004 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-01-20 10:01 PM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY!  Despite the shed skin, 19 can be wonderful!  
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-01-20 10:20 PM


if youre l9, then im 48....olol
have a happy

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3 posted 2004-01-21 12:53 PM


Happy Birthday Kaoru~
It's good to keep those candles burning,
it goes with the glowing, and you do that so well!  

Hope you had a great day!

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4 posted 2004-01-21 01:01 AM


my "new" sweaters are older than that...goodness, I'm getting old...seriously, though...your candles are a reflection of your soul...always warm and bright...acknowledge their enlightenment while you can still appreciate them...the shades of life difuse them soon enough...good write
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5 posted 2004-01-21 08:32 AM


Happy Birthday woman!!

You are the same age as my son *weeping*

ah, hell, I don't feel my age...

You have a very happy day!!!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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6 posted 2004-01-21 08:49 AM



And thank goodness for that.  Happy Birthday, Meghan.

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7 posted 2004-01-21 09:05 AM


Happy Birthday!

this and the other piece you posted are both very strong pieces.. and speak to the same things in some ways.. yet differently...
well done Meghan.. as always, I am impressed and pleased to read.

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8 posted 2004-01-21 10:18 AM


enjoyed
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