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Open Poetry #30

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Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

0 posted 2004-01-20 09:21 PM

Does he know what he does to me?
Does he really even care?
Will the spell he puts on me never end?
It doesn't really seem fair.

He holds the key to my soul.
He has for so very long.
Why can't I rid myself of him?
His power is way too strong.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-20 09:27 PM

Youngatheart -- the feelings are familiar ones. Good write!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-01-20 09:29 PM

Talk it all over with him! Go ahead....you might be pleasantly surprised. Chris

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-01-21 02:28 AM

Im living this one!
i feel for you

the grasp is so tight it aches, but it aches soooo good sometimes.
...but, sometimes, we need to let go...

*think i'll go have another key cut*

i enjoyed this

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

4 posted 2004-01-21 08:51 AM

Because your mind see's no more you are in your hearts eye. I love this write Youngatheart, excellent.

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