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Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

0 posted 2004-01-17 06:20 AM

At night it is so simple.
My untouched body feels hollow
And restless without you tangled up-in me.
You belong in the nape of my neck;
In the small of my back…
You belong with me.
We just fit.

But it’s missing you that’s complicated…
Now that you’ve left me.
(now that we’ve lost each other)
It’s getting over the loss of your presence,
and knowing...
I can’t have you regardless
Of where you and I belong in this world.

It’s knowing how much
We both love each other…
And accepting that love isn’t enough.
(obviously)

It’s awakening without you…
Living without you…
Breathing without you…

(oh god how I miss you here right now)

…the nape of my neck
…the small of my back
and everything in between these holes
you fill

i am so empty

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-17 07:14 AM

Kristen,
Your pain and loss tears the heart,,,,stay strong,,,,sad, touching, write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2004-01-17 09:05 AM

strong base, strong words ... and a strong heart

      emptiness consumes faster than anything,
        accepting curbs it, but only time
          nourishes it.

               an excellent write and heart

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-17 04:28 PM

Love full and all encompasing, physical mental almost smothering

Song - can't remember the singer

And words are all I have to take your love away

This is almost elemental love on a physical and mental level

Nice

Dave

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-17 05:48 PM

Kristin Eve -- I am wordless in wonder of your expression, exquisite.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-01-17 11:04 PM

Nice writing...indeed...James

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-01-20 05:05 AM

oh this speaks LOUDLY!
but in a gentle way....i feel this all the way to the bone...we all have known this ache...well written!

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

7 posted 2004-01-20 05:15 AM

love is fleeting
pain is permanent

hard impact poem
will be looking for more

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-01-20 12:54 PM

"My untouched body feels hollow"

Perfect line..

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

9 posted 2004-01-20 02:55 PM

I can't believe that the love you are expressing isn't enough.
It feels like enough and I'm on the other end of a computer screen.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-01-21 03:32 AM

a great piece...makes me think about my empty places

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

11 posted 2004-01-21 08:48 AM

It’s awakening without you…
Living without you…
Breathing without you…

It's the agony of the loss and you word it so well from the heart and soul.

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