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A million questions, endless answers.
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A million questions, endless answers. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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How about another complaint from you? Is it so hard to live to walk to breathe and taste the life you have been given? How about another smoke, to calm your nerves? Could you replace a lung that's inhaled me? Just like shedding the skin that's touched. Cutting out the tongue that's tasted, and helped to create the words you promised you'd never stop speaking. How sadistic can silk be? As it weaves across my neck, telling me that I am not allowed to go..anywhere or do anything.. but suffocate. I can no longer percieve the blurred lines, the haze around the sun, what more can I say? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
More elegant than a noose... but just as constricting. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*ouch*...this reminds me of people and places...well, lets just say, i know where this angst is coming from and i salute you for writing about it... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
anything.. but suffocate. I can no longer percieve the blurred lines, the haze around the sun, what more can I say? sometimes it is all so convuluted and you just wil never know good inner turmoil showing thru here |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kaoru -- wow, you pour so much emotion into your writing, I can tell. It is so good.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"How sadistic can silk be? As it weaves across my neck, telling me that I am not allowed to go..anywhere or do anything.. but suffocate." Excellent write here Meg. Intensity redefined...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Meg, this was wonderful...as always..  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Taking a thought and twisting it raw... you do that very, very well. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
There is nothing more to say. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh there is strength here |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
That was abosultely brilliant: Could you replace a lung that's inhaled me? Amazing, aboslutely incredible. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do like..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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