Tumblewood 3 - regurgated ideas of things that stay in your mind

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Open Poetry #30

Tumblewood 3 - regurgated ideas of things that stay in your mind

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-01-20 05:15 PM

I look over my shoulder
There is my women
I look ahead, sand
Beneath me, the one thing I trust
My horse
My guns sit silent now
And I ride on
The colour of green and yellow is the town
At least the wind has no bias
It just blows
Tumbleweed
I need to get out to the honesty of the land
And let my heart take it's time

muted

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since 2004-01-15

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-20 05:21 PM

well, when ya get back in town...we'll have a whiskey waiting for ya!

"westerns" are *awesome*

the call of the land can seem so inviting

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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2 posted 2004-01-20 06:13 PM

I actually stood in a girlie bar in Manila drinking red wine

No I didn't enjoy the women

I did however try to negotiate the point in the floor at which different manager ladies took over

dave

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

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3 posted 2004-01-20 06:26 PM

I need to get out to the honesty of the land
And let my heart take it's time''''

a wonderful ending....nicely done....with wonderful images...

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

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