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0 posted 2004-01-20 02:01 PM



The  ~whisper~
of your love
flowing gently
As gently as a soft mist
of rain softly falling
Touching my skin tenderly
as it lands upon
~whispering love~
as I feel.....

I wish that I could read this to you all....
just as I feel it........for him


© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-20 02:04 PM


whispers so delicate...
so much enjoy gentle pieces such as this...
thank you for such a "softening" experience..
just lovely

Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar,
Someday I'll be So damn much more
Cause I'm bigger than my body
Gives me credit for.
~John Mayer

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2 posted 2004-01-20 02:05 PM


Ethel~

Don't think you need to....I read it slowly, with pauses here and there...and it came out beautifully sensual.

  I got it...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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3 posted 2004-01-20 02:05 PM


so softly and delicately whispered Ethel..
beautiful

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4 posted 2004-01-20 02:07 PM


That was great, I really liked it.
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5 posted 2004-01-20 02:13 PM


Softly sensual...and with so much feeling.
One of your best Ethel!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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6 posted 2004-01-20 02:18 PM


muted, and I thank you for
your softly tender reply.
.
.
LOL Susan...and I thought that
you just might.
Thank you....
.
.
Thank you, Donna. I think that
you understand, too.  
.
.
Iron Wolf, thank you! I'm so
glad that you liked it.  
.
.
Thank you, Nancy. I appreciate the
Queen of Romance saying that.
.
.
I really appreciate all of you.
Hugs to each one.....
Ethel

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7 posted 2004-01-20 02:33 PM


awwww sweet lady, but indeed I hear the whisper...soft gentle and very loving

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

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8 posted 2004-01-20 02:37 PM


Thank you so much, Lauren.....
and I thought that you would.....

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9 posted 2004-01-20 02:40 PM


This is great. Thank you for sharing. So wonderful to feel that much for another person. I'll get there, one day.
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10 posted 2004-01-20 02:41 PM



Possibly one of your best, Ethel...
at least, in my book.

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11 posted 2004-01-20 02:57 PM


oh yes Ethel, I most definately understand...
definately...
you are a gem!

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12 posted 2004-01-20 03:30 PM




(smiles) Ethel, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, your heart always whispers the beauty of true love that is super sweet, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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13 posted 2004-01-20 04:45 PM


now ethel your words come across reading as if one was to close their eyes and pretend you were saying them.  just wonderful

bernie

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Bernie Slicker

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14 posted 2004-01-20 06:14 PM


I had to stop by for a most beautiful reminder that this special love exists.

Thank you for being here for me!

Patricia

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15 posted 2004-01-20 06:18 PM


Terrina, thank you so much....
and I do hope that you will meet
someoine who you feel this for.  
.
.
Thank you, Karilea. I'm
glad that you like it.
.
.
Thanks Donna
And, you are a gem, too.
.
.
I appreciate ya'll so much.  
Hugs to you all,  
Ethel

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16 posted 2004-01-20 06:22 PM


Noah, thank you. That's
so sweet of you to say.  
.
.
Bernie, it sounds like you
understand, too. Thanks.  
.
.
Patricia, thank you, sweet lady.
I appreciate you too.  
.
.
Thank you all for your sweet replies...
and I do appreciate them.
Hugs to you all  
Ethel

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