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0 posted 2004-01-20 03:24 PM


(Richard, your poem so deeply touched my heart as I too believe that "war is unhealthy for children and other living things". Here's a re-post from last February pre-Iraq war, which I wrote in frustration of the Administration declaring war, and turning many boys into men, an "abduction" to me! It is also available on Poets Against The War! )
http://poetsagainstthewar.org/




(Hanky-Alert!)

Abduction
By: Noah Eaton
2/8/03

Momma slowly hangs up the phone, quivering
Mushroom clouds of sulfur fill her mind
The wind is knocking on my window
Black storks descending to take their babies tonight...

Black storks descending tonight...

Listen, the screen door slams, Hey Son, have I got news for you!
Her veins from her hand trembling, gone red to blue
Those same hands she used to nurture and feed her kids
These same hands will be empty now, how will she take this?

Call yourself Abduction
Call yourself Blasphemy
Call yourself AUTODAFE
Who will account for the frost heaving?
While you're in your neck of the wood pretending you're breathing?
Meanwhile, I'll just keep standing my ground
Watching the mothers tidy pre-made beds
Stirring ladles in chicken soup for the usurped soul
Victims of this invisible abduction
Victims of this shame...

Biscuits and gravy are lying on the kitchen table
The last meal she will see her son eat before he goes
She swears that psalm on her china plate will remain her leitmotif
But the sunlight it reflects lacks the birefringence she thought she'd keep

How does it feel to have incalary days?
How does it feel if you can really feel these birth pangs?
So why need all of this circumscription?
If you want this damn thing so bad, why don't you come and get it?

Call yourself Abduction
Call yourself Blasphemy
Call yourself AUTODAFE
Who will account for the frost heaving?
While you're in your neck of the wood pretending you're breathing?
Meanwhile, I'll just keep standing my ground
Watching the mothers tidy pre-made beds
Stirring ladles in chicken soup for the usurped soul
Victims of this invisible abduction
Victims of this shame...

The instance I read the autoinoculation in the news today
Was the second I came down with the sickness
The instance I saw the thieves running through my neighborhood
I found myself already behind the portcullis...

But I dare not say what I think you're going to say
Gerrymandling on your abridged interpretations of the agenda
Ghostwriting with scholars you've never shaken hands with
Playing chess with a ghost that only wants an armistice

Here's Allegro to resemble the shackles of innocence
Here's Adagio to assert the red vultures of pestilence
Here's Andante to reveal behind the cloaks the real idiots
Here's Presto to place blame on the ransoms you permit...

Call yourself Abduction
Call yourself The Tragedian
Call yourself Gethsemane
Who will account for the frost heaving?
While you're in your neck of the wood pretending you're breathing?
Meanwhile, I'll just keep standing my ground
Watching the mothers tidy pre-made beds
Stirring ladles in chicken soup for the usurped soul
Victims of this invisible abduction
Victims of this wicked game...

"Ring around the rosie,
pocket full of posies,
ashes, ashes,
who'll fall next?"





"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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1 posted 2004-01-20 03:29 PM


*eyes wide open*
wow,wow, powerfully, painful, incredible

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2 posted 2004-01-20 04:21 PM


Heartmoving....so full of emotion.
thank you for sharing Noah.
May God bless you and lighten your path always.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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3 posted 2004-01-20 04:56 PM


It is am immense poem

I was a volunteer for a Nuclear Flying Disaster Column back in the 60's and a volunteer to be first out (I didn't want to wait to die some 8 hours later)

Yes I have seen the full potential stuff, and the decisions that may need to be made afterwards

You in writing this

Have also done so

Dave

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4 posted 2004-01-20 06:28 PM


Wow... this is really a thought provoking poem

Well written

Steve

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