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Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2004-01-20 12:57 PM

I wasn't as far along as I'd hoped
My career was a terminal stop
Music, a jealous mistress, they said
I felt I had no other choice
So I agreed on the deal he gave
My one darkened sale to make
As I sat there signing on the dotted line
Knowing full well what was done
It occurred to me something was wrong
A missing piece to be found
Looking at this being I faced
To whom I'd just sold my soul
"Shouldn't I have siogned in blood," I asked
"Can this deal be binding and true"
He smiled back so warm and serene
Suit of white, eyes so piercing and blue
"Something you forgot, oh child of mine
Evil is not the only buyer in town."

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-20 07:29 AM

Nifty man! I like the way it rolls,,then twists at the end. Your love affair with music,,,,,I know the lengths you'd go to to have her,,,,,,

Very good write.
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

2 posted 2004-01-20 09:40 AM

This is VERY cool! Not a twist often seen, I must say I like it

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-01-20 11:11 AM

Bradly~
This is MARVELOUS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-01-20 11:13 AM

Oh, when we dance with the devil.
This fits in so many lives in ways
we sometimes cannot comprehend...at first.

Gotta watch that fine print, Ringo.

Good job!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-20 11:16 AM

Well said Brad,...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-01-20 11:18 AM

So does that mean you are busy on Sundays?

Very nicely done.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-01-20 11:47 AM

deeper thoughts within the lines, nicely said Ringo....

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2004-01-20 04:30 PM

(big angel hugs) And if it is, well, consider me quilty as charged, LOL! (smiles) You know how I love music and that we both love John Lennon and that I write my own music and this year am hoping to get signed to a label to express my voice to the world, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

9 posted 2004-01-20 04:38 PM

evil is not the only buyer in town - awesomely true! I enjoyed the story

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

10 posted 2004-01-20 06:37 PM

Michelle- How much more support could a shlub like me get??? Thanks always.

Brian- I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

Marge- Right back atcha! Thanks for the kind words.

Sunshine- The fine print has caught me more than once. Thanks for reading my little scribble.

Nancy- Always so kind. I'm honored that you enjoyed it.

Susan- Sundays USED to be for sleeping off the show from Saturday... until my daughter decided we were going to Church... Now, I am busy.lol Thanks for the kind words.

Lauren- I'm glad you noticed. Thank you.

Noah- One of the most supportive. Thank you for reading this. And when you get signed, I want the... well... family first... I want the 10th CD. Signed of course. I wish you luck, and skill with your quest.

Copperbell- Thank you. I am glad you saw something within my words that you enjoyed.

Much love to all.

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

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