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gray between walls |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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gray between walls within these walls lies a carpet of gray slightly etched inter-weaving patterns mapping paths like directions past roads taken following lines though patterns etch will not re-draw from memories wrote trying to create new lines upon history with each marking the paths of present unfolding life’s directions decisions made forward or should we back up retrace lines again after laying new carpet different in color between these walls . . . bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this very much. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice bernie...hope all is going well darn this keyboard.... *s it writes things I don't type. M |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*pink* is good... always a *tickled* colour! and you know, ive many times followed the pattern on the carpet....sometimes its better than looking at the stains on the walls! i enjoyed this Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
new lines upon history with each marking the paths of present unfolding life’s directions decisions made forward or should we back up retrace lines again after laying new carpet different in color between these walls outstanding Bernie, just outstanding! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you for reading Terrina thanks M, no everything is going just fine. just in the new place have a room without much in it and was laying on the floor last night, and a million thoughts went thru my mind. and this is what i came up with. plus along time ago, couple of years, serenity helped me to do some different writing...it started with a wall, and i no longer do just pieces that ryhme. muted thanks for reading, and ah yes stains upon the walls, guess i could write one about that. but then it would be so so long, opps telling my age. but PINK....NOT!!! thank you Gentle Spirit, i am trying to write better. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bernie, this was really good. I enjoyed reading it.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I say never back up |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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