Mixtures Of Past And Present

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Open Poetry #30

Mixtures Of Past And Present

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-01-20 11:52 AM

Mixtures of Past and Present

There are so many thoughts
My mind collected each day
Some shall remain keepers
Those I have allowed to stay

Those thoughtful ponderings
Shall remain essential to me
Knowing I am never shallow
Deep thinker I will always be

Mixtures of past and present
Or those thoughts soon to be
Blending the old and the new
Becoming minds woven tapestry

With my continued perception
Where the minds eye can see
Of affectionate loving thoughts
I save and store in my memory

Hope©2004

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-01-20 11:58 AM

Mixtures of past and present
Or those thoughts soon to be
Blending the old and the new
Becoming minds woven tapestry

lovely Hope, just lovely!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2004-01-20 12:07 PM

Thank you for your kind reply...I did change
one word in thart verse to "Colouring " instead of becoming , seem to fit better LOL

Mixtures of past and present
Or those thoughts soon to be
Blending the old and the new
Colouring the woven tapestry

Hope

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-20 12:50 PM

how about "creating?" Hope, I truly do believe this is one of your finest and I kept it safely for another read. Have a great day over there.

Life is but a magical mystery

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