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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-01-19 09:44 PM

Feel the real of me.
I'm 3 D fluidity.
Touch is all it takes.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-19 10:12 PM

I adore the word fluidity. Lovely sounding, lovely seeing.

McLean

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-01-19 10:49 PM

i feel you too,
very real always coming thru

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-19 11:10 PM

KACY -- GOOD ONE. I LIKE......jo

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-01-19 11:24 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, I just love the depths and dimensions of your poetry, sweet friend, been missing reading you and now I'm back in high gear, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

5 posted 2004-01-20 02:02 AM

You'r easy to feel with your gift of words,touching's another matter.lol.Those that do are truly blessed by the experience.
....

....

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-20 02:10 AM

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2004-01-20 04:05 AM

I like this senryu a lot...feel it

Charisma

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

8 posted 2004-01-20 04:46 AM

ah senyrus... they have such a simple structure... yet when written by the right person, they manage to convey so much not said.

Beautiful write!

"By the time you finish reading this...
You will have finished readding this"

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-20 06:07 AM

Feel the real of me.
I'm 3 D fluidity.
Touch is all it takes.

touch:
both magic and real-
these dreams.

~C

Great senryu, playful, inspires, touches!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

10 posted 2004-01-20 06:19 AM

I love this!

Patricia

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-01-20 11:04 AM

yuppers!!! Wondrous poem

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

12 posted 2004-01-20 11:05 AM

Wow, this is great. Big meanings come in small packages.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

13 posted 2004-01-20 12:28 PM

I feel this ....

... a constant flow.

*S NICE TOUCH!

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