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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-01-19 07:27 PM



Magic
Magic in her soul
And the touch of her soft hand
Makes my smile appear.

believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2004-01-19 07:33 PM


Oooh, this is pure..."magic" scorpio. Love it. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

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2 posted 2004-01-19 07:50 PM


scorpio
A keeper. Well done.

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3 posted 2004-01-19 07:50 PM


I like how you combined wit and romance in this short one!  Nicely done!
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4 posted 2004-01-19 09:00 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, your poetry is magic too and I wish for it all to be cast upon you tenfold or more, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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5 posted 2004-01-19 09:20 PM


very very nice
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6 posted 2004-01-19 09:33 PM


your words are like a salve to one's heart...so soothing
scorpio
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7 posted 2004-01-19 09:53 PM


Thank you Chris. I'm glad you like it.

Very kind of you, Sy.  Thank you.

Thank you Sadelite.  Your comments are much appreciated.

Noah, thank you for your support.

Midnitesun, thank you for commenting.

Thank you Steavenr.  I appreciate your kind words.



believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2004-01-19 09:57 PM


Ah Scorpio...You must know how I feel about this!
You write with magic in your pen poet sir!
She is one lucky lady indeed.
~Soft smiles & tender hugs, Nancy~


scorpio
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9 posted 2004-01-19 09:58 PM


tinker, thank you.  And yes I know how you feel because I've read the magic you write.  You humble me.

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2004-01-19 11:12 PM


Scorpio -- I was just telling my college-aged daughter tonight about ONE OF my favorite songS when I was a teenager -- 'DO YOU BELIEVE IN MAGIC.'  Of course, you know by now, I adore your post here!  Your Magic made me think of my Magic.  Thanks.  

[This message has been edited by iliana (01-20-2004 03:37 AM).]

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11 posted 2004-01-20 02:12 AM


softly beautiful
scorpio
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Yes Iliana, I remember that song.  Thank you.

Passing shadows, Thanks for commenting.  Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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13 posted 2004-01-20 08:43 AM



I believe in magic!

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14 posted 2004-01-20 09:15 AM


ah.. nice to again read your offering...

as usual you do it well..

I enjoyed

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15 posted 2004-01-20 10:40 AM



Yes...done very well, indeed.
Thank you, Scorpio.

scorpio
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16 posted 2004-01-20 08:22 PM


Ron thank you.  I appreciate your support.

Thank you Karilea for those kind words.

believe in what your heart feels...

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