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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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something is forming spell binding but reassuring painless drugs needles are dull slim to null that they are getting old thoughts of years swalloing me through time holes of the days when things were different but sane sweet dreams of insanity drip and flow crimson red metalic blue blindness from the meaning of the core of my body and being who would of thought the one my dreams I would be seeing is what i would want to be feeling., Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
this is a very pretty poem. i enjoyed reading it! "By the time you finish reading this... |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
something is forming spell binding but reassuring painless drugs needles are dull well.... 'pretty' wasn't the best choice of words for what i wanted to say. perhaps..reflective? In either case, i enjoyed it because of the style and imagery "By the time you finish reading this... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Strong vibrant earthy and talking of an alternative because the brain needs the excitement not the body Yes I think your words are right Dave |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
sweet dreams of insanity drip and flow crimson red metalic blue blindness from the meaning of the core of my body and being this is intense, this i kinda sad nice write. Kindly, |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Thank you  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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