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Open Poetry #30

Sun arise

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-19 04:22 PM

The sun rises in the east
I rise with it

I see the dawn begin
I stride with it

I chase the running day
I leave your love behind

I need that long dusty road
To put myself at peace

So I don’t have to call the world
Something beyond belief

Like a liar and a thief

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-19 04:25 PM

love it love it...to the point...
concise! and full of impact!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-01-19 04:53 PM

Very good!

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

3 posted 2004-01-19 05:20 PM

Nice one, Dave...thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-01-19 06:00 PM

Thanks

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-01-20 02:09 AM

sometimes I strain to understand...

but then it's so good

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