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Just, Touch
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Just, Touch |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Just, Touch Do not say you are too busy or that you have somewhere else to be All I ask is that you just stay a moment and touch the flesh of me for the return to you of such a caress would be unconditional, more than heaven-blessed, this Love. Just, touch, and find a willing soul one that will meet your dreams, walk with you along the shoals. Just, touch, find that harmony, that sense of loss you’ve come to know, just touch your heart in me. In the quiet, for I shall not speak, find all that was, though yet you seek… and lay here now, quiet with me, for I anticipate much, in your Touch of me.  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
If that was me I would never need to open a door again the fire would just leave the doorknobs on the floor Very nice, very well written Yes very nice indeed Dave |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!! up into my library  (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Karilea... Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, You and I must be on the same page today (This morning I wrote a poem about my faithful dog, Sam! And, this afternoon, after you read my poem about Robert,the guitar maker, you told me Robert is your brother and also a musician. Too strange! This is about the second or third time it has happened lately with your writes-you cover what is on my mind! Seriously, I enjoyed your poem very much. ~Sadie~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Karilea, what a beautiful dog. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I truly believe all other beautiful creatures of God can truly relate to our feelings, as my cats and birds did as a little boy! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This is fabulous! My best friend is my 12 year old dog, she's been with me longer than my husband and kids. With the ins and outs all day long, the swinging of the door, I can only imagine, in her eyes, it seems she's left behind for the rat race so often. I think I'll go snuggle with her now. Thank you for this paw-warming write! McLean |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
an absolutely beautiful write yes, touch |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes and sometimes only our pets are truly worthy of the best part of our soul to share |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, this: "Just, touch, find that harmony, that sense of loss you’ve come to know, just touch your heart in me." this, was shear genius! The whole write was lovely! Thanks you for penning and sharing it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now you've made me want to be a pet massage therapist |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is a beautiful poem, Karilea. BTW - Where did you get the picture of Toerag? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
laffin at dixie...sure sounds like a great idea. I miss havin a lil one around under foot! Lovely kari... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks for the furry smile Kari...  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Such a lovely poem... very beautiful |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really sweet Karilea your dog is soo cuteMaree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Karilea, you make me feel guilty .... I will rush and go and play with my cat Zelda .... she is waiting. Wonderful write! Love and .. off I am. Margherita |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah...smiling at this, Karilea... Hugs, lady...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very sweet Karilea! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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